>Every year {} about {a} million animals {die} in {Poland alone}. They die because
>people kill animals for their fur. Many people think that this is
>immoral behaviour and {I} consider myself to {be one of} them. It is my own opinion
>that killing beasts for their fur is barbaric and should not {take} place in
>the twenty-first century.
> First of all, {killing of} animals {reduces} variety in nature. A lot
>of {different kinds} of animals are {in} danger of extinction. They {will not stand} a chance of
>{surviving} if people {still keep killing} them. Furthermore, {I} do not
>understand people who wear animal furs and contribute to {dying of} a few
>{million animal} beings. It is unnecessary because, instead {of} natural
>furs, they can wear man-made furs. Man-made materials are cheaper and
>very similar to {the} original.
>Above all, it is cruel. {The} animals which will be {of} use in the future for
>their fur are {kept} in very cramped {cages}. Of course {such} places
>where they are {kept} {do} not {comply with the} sanitary conditions. Their lives {are}
>short and unhappy. Many people, {such as} the producers of fur, forget that
>animals {are} not things; like {} people, {they} feel. {The} society should
>{} reduce their suffering, because animals are {living} creatures.
>Unforunately, {it} is {otherwise}.
> Some people hold that animal fur is warmer and more attractive than
>man-made materials. However, in my opinion, that is not {an} enough
>important reason {for killing} animals.
> In conclusion, man-made materials {are not} exactly {the same as} natural fur,
>but wearing artificial {furs is not so harmful {to furry animals}. If people {continue killing}
>beasts {for} this reason, {the} balance in {the} environment will be {destroyed}.