Na samym początku chcę zaznaczyć, że to tylko moja próba poprawienia. Zdaję sobie sprawę, że i tak dalje są błędy. Więc nie sugeruj się całkowicie moją korektą.
My name is Marta and I always wanted to be a coctor. This is/It is my dream and I'm going to go to Medical School.
I think it is a very responsible prefession. A doctor must be unexcitable and he should love what he does.
In my family there are two doctors. My father works in a hospital and he get raunded me to this profession(nie wiem czy to dobrze, czy nie). I always wanted to help people. To be/ being? a doctor will be for me a real challange. At school I was good in chemistry and biology and I have been interested in being a doctor for many years.
People always get sick so doctors are always need(ed)?. Become a doctor is very important for me. I want to see smiling faces of health people.
In the futur I'm going to be a doctor and If I will work hard, my dream can come true.