opowiadanie na jutro. spr.

Proszę jakby ktoś był miły i sprawdził to opowiadanie oraz podał wskazówki co zrobiłem źle :]. Jednego zdania nie umiałem przetłumaczyć ;]

It was a dark and winter night, in the distance I saw only flashes the words 'Gas Station'. I stood in the street, [ nie widziałem nawet jak się tam znalazłem] . Everywhere was white. I saw the car at the station. It was empty, I heard only the music from the radio. Sang Christmas songs. In near wasn't anyone. I was scared. Suddenly I saw blood on the car, the music stopped playing and I heard a cry from the station. I ran to the door. I saw a woman and monster. It was a zombie. He tried to hurt her.
Sudenly I heart my mother voice: "Woke up, it's time to go to school!" It was just bad dream!
What a relief it was to change into a human being once again!

Z góry thx.

It was a dark 'and winter' (cos tu nie tak, jak chcesz powiedziec 'zimowy' to dark winter's night) night, in the distance I saw only flashes AND the
words 'Gas Station'. I stood 'in' ON the street, [nie widziałem nawet jak
się tam znalazłem- I didn't know/I couldn't think how I found myself there) . . IT 'Sang' PLAYED Christmas songs. 'In near wasn't anyone' (THERE WASN'T ANYONE NEARBY)
I saw a woman and A monster. He tried to 'hurt' (moze lepiej dramatycznie i KIL) her.
'Sudenly' SUDDENLY I heart my mother'S voice: "WAke up, it's time to go to school!"
It was (mozesz dodac ...after all) just A bad dream!

ciekawy tekst:

It was a dark winter night. In the distance, I COULD SEE words flashing 'Gas Station'. I stood alone in the street, not knowing how I got there. EveryTHING was white. I saw A car at the station. It was empty, BUT I COULD HEAR music PLAYING ON the radio. A Christmas song WAS PLAYING. No one was near by. I was scared. Suddenly I saw blood on the car, the music stopped playing and I heard a cry from the station. I ran to the door. I saw a woman and monster. It was a zombie. He tried to hurt her.
Sudenly I heart my mother voice: "WAke up, it's time to go to school!" It was just bad dream!
What a relief it was to change into a human being once again!

tego nie zauwazylam:


SudDenly I hearD my mother'S voice: "WAke up, it's time to go to school!"

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