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"Hello there this is me "
My name is Paul . I'm seven-teen years old and I'm from gdynia in the north of Poland .
I'm a student , I like listening to music and travelling in my free time .
I'm Virgo so I'm quite sensible . So I don't have many trouble .Sometimes I can be moody but I have a tend to be shy . In my opinion I'm quite talkative and sociable every day .

My name is Paul. I'm seventeen years old and I'm from Gdynia on
the north of Poland .
I'm a student. In my free time I usually listen to the music and I travel, too.
I'm Virgo and I'm quite sensible, therefore I haven't a lot of trouble.
Sometimes I'm moody but I tend to be shy . In my opinion I'm quite talkative and sociable every day.

Mam nadzieję, że choć trochę pomogłam, ale nie jestem jakoś wybitnie przekonana, że to, co napisałam jest w zupełności poprawne pod względem gramatycznym.

I'm seventeen years old and I'm from Gdynia 'on' IN the north of Poland .
In my free time I usually listen to 'the' (niepotr) music and I
travel ',' (nie rozumiem dlaczego przecinek)too.
I'm A Virgo and I'm quite sensible, therefore I 'haven't' (nie, zrob to inaczej...don't get into) a lot of trouble.
In my opinion I'm quite talkative and sociable 'every day' (nie rozumiem tego na koncu zdania).