Narkotyki - proszę o sprawdzenie

Todays young people reach after drugs . Causes are different. Some take a drugs, that to run away from problems, different meanwhile for party. However in every case taking drugs leads to the same. Namely, to dependence, which it can lead to death also.
Therefore I think, that we should fight with narcomania. We should inform a teenagers about the results of taking a drugs.
According to me, parents fulfil the most important part here. As this just from family house, children should carry out reliable knowledge about real working narcotic The parents should know to speak with their a kids. The subject of drugs should not be so the subject of taboo. Moreover the parents should assure their children calm, safe house, in which a kids will feel, that are dear and accepted. By what in future with certainty they will not taste drugs.

Proszę o sprawdzenie.

Today young people experiment drugs . Causes are different. Some
>take drugs, because they wany to run away from problems, others want to have fun during the party. However in every case taking drugs leads to the same outcome. Namely,
>to addiction, which can also lead to death .
>Therefore I think, that we should fight with narcomania. We should
>inform teenagers about the results of taking drugs.
>In my opinion, parents fulfil the most important duty here. The children should gain reliable knowledge about the drugs in their family houses. The parents should know how to speak with
>their kids. The subject of drugs should not be taboo. Moreover the parents should give their children calm, safe
>house, in which kids will feel, that they are dear and accepted. Thanks to that >in future with certainty they will not taste drugs.

>Today young people experiment (with)drugs .
>Therefore(tutaj przecinek) I think,(tu przecinek niepotrzebny moim zdaniem) that we should fight with narcomania.
>Moreover(tutaj przecinek) the(chyba bez the) parents should give their children calm, safe(te wyrazy powinny miec inna forme...abstract nouns mysle)
>Thanks to that (chodzi mi po głwie inna wersja..Thanks for)

>Moreover(tutaj przecinek) the(chyba bez the) parents should give
>their children calm, safe(te wyrazy powinny miec inna forme...abstract
>nouns mysle)

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