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I am writing to responseble of the State on the leaflets, which have read about a Madonna concert recently. Thankful very be if they will lend state information me also do capability of getting of autograph will be after completed concert. I am a huge fan of that I wanted to know when it starts to tour and how many will. Please also give me a place and time in which the concerts will be held, and how much tickets cost and whether you can buy them on the Internet or in a particular point. Unfortunately, so, has concert return on handbill with request for state about answering on several questions no concrete information concerning approximating me. At the end I still wanted to ask where I was able to purchase CDs, t-shirts, mugs and other merchandise related to the Madonna concert. Sincerely,

Please also give me a
>place and time in which the concerts will be held, and how much
>tickets cost and whether you can buy them on the Internet or in a
>particular point.

At the end I still
>wanted to ask where I was able to purchase CDs, t-shirts, mugs and
>other merchandise related to the Madonna concert. Sincerely,

Te dwa zdania mogą być. Pewnie je skądś odpisałaś.

Reszta jest z translatora i nie ma żadnego sensu.