BARDZO PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE-PILNE

BARDZO PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE PONIŻSZEGO TEKSTU JEST MI ON PILNIE POTRZEBNY NA JUTRO


My grandparents had meet in a cafeteria. Alice worked their after school, and John was coming their with friends very often. When he saw her for the first time, he wonted to get to know her. To know her better he started coming to this cafeteria alone. But he hadn't met her that time, because she went to visit her aunt in the village. John tried to find her in all cafeterias in the city, but he couldn't. When the autumn come Alica returned to the school and to the cafeteria where she worked. John's friends had seen her their and told him, that Alice was back. That massage made him so happy, and he suddenly went to this cafeteria. He caught her in last time, because it was afternoon and she was going to finish her work. He started to talk with her. Conversation went well, next he proposed ice-cream and later that she go with her to her home. Four years later they were married and lived happily ever after.

My grandparents (had) MET in a cafeteria. Alice worked THERE after school, and John was coming THERE with HER friends very often. When he saw her for the first time, he WANTED to get to know her. IN ORDER TO know her better he started coming to this cafeteria alone. But he hadn't met her that time, because she went to visit her aunt in the village. John tried to find her in all cafeterias in the city, but he couldn't. When the autumn CAME Alica returned to the school and to the cafeteria (where she worked). John's friends had seen her THERE and told him, that Alice CAME back. That massage made him so happy, and he suddenly went to this cafeteria. He caught her in last time, because (it was afternoon and) she was going to finish her work. He started to talk with her. THE conversation went well. Next he proposed ice-cream and later that HE WENT with her to her home. Four years later they were married and lived happily /ever after.?/ to date (do teraz)

Ludzie, co wy robicie!!!
Ja ten sam tekst poprawialam pare dni temu. Asker wpisuje to samo 10 razy, a wtedy nawet nie chce jej sie popatrzyc czy ktos odpowiada - jak juz pisalam, lenistwo wola na nowo pisac, bo przeciez szukac cos to sprawia im wielkie problemy. Tylko nie wiem dlaczego ja, jak i inni poswiecamy czas na sprawdzanie czegos, a potem asker ma to w dup....
Dlatego, jeszcze raz mowie, nie wklejajcie tego samego 10 razy.

>Ludzie, co wy robicie!!!
>Ja ten sam tekst poprawialam pare dni temu.

Nie parę dni temu a przedwczoraj, tyle że nie naniosłaś poprawek a tylko wskazałaś miejsca z błędami i wyjaśniłaś na czym te błędy polegają. Pytająca widocznie nie miała czasu na przemyślenie Twoich podpowiedzi, dlatego podała raz jeszcze ten tekst. I słusznie - znalazł się ktoś, kto jej to poprawił. Nie musi już myśleć.

>>tyle że nie naniosłaś poprawek a tylko wskazałaś miejsca z błędami i wyjaśniłaś na czym te błędy polegają. Pytająca widocznie nie miała czasu na przemyślenie Twoich podpowiedzi, dlatego podała raz jeszcze ten tekst. I słusznie - znalazł się ktoś, kto jej to poprawił. Nie musi już myśleć.

...no to teraz dopiero zrozumialam jak ta dzisiejsza mlodziez 'mysli'. Matko, nawet nie maja checi ruszyc ta jedna jedyna szara komorka, zeby cos pomyslec, widocznie mozg nie jest do myslenia.
..I jeszcze jedno, jak ja znajduje czas na poprawki i wytlumaczenia gdzie co jest zle, to co najmniej oczekuje od pseudo niby inteligentnych ludzi, ze tez znajda czas na poprawienie tego..
...Czy lenistwo to jest jednym z WYMAGANYCH cech Polskiej mlodziezy?