hej...
napisałam dziś kilkuzdaniową pracę w czasie past simple opisującą jeden dzień z moich wakacji...
proszę was o sprawdzenie i jeśli to możliwe poprawienie blędów..
ps... potrzebuję to na jutro :(
It's day was very hot.
the sun beatsed down mercilessly and so us decided with my parents spent day on the lakes. Rang along cousines and uncles and rode. one the lakes was as early as many people so looked for right in place for spreaded out blankets took a little a few time. took off one's clothes, trip and came into water. we swam and fooled around three hour. left a water in order to rested and sat on blankets. the sun firmly burnt us. the day was very succesfull.
zaznaczam ze nie jestem zbyt dobra z angielskiego... :(