sprawdzicie mi to? błaaaaagam

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WHY WE SHOULD GET a GOOD MARKs:

*BECOUSE WE LIKE ENGLISH
*WE WAS TALKING WITH GIRL FROM ITALY IN ENGLISH AND IT WAS EASY FOR US.
*WE DON'T THINK SO THAT WE CAN ONLY FOR 3!
*WE DO WELL WITH THIS LANGUAGE
*MANY PERSON ARE ATTEND A COURSE.BUT NOT WE!
*WE WANT TO IMPROVE SKILLS AND GET A GOOD EDUCATION.
*WE STUDY HARD FOR GOOD MARKS
*SOMETIMES WE ARE PAIN IN THE NECK BUT YOU SHOULD APPRECIATE US!
*YOU PROMISED US A GOOD MARKS IF WE TAKE BACK OUR HOMEWORKS.
*YOU SHOULD MAKE GOOD ON YOUR PROMISE :)
*becAuse...
*we were talking with a girl
* we don't think that we can work only for 3
*we are doing...
*many people attend a course but we don't
*... gain a proper education
* we are studying hard.
* we are a pain... but you can come to terms with us ( nie do końca wiem o co tu chodziło)
*you promised us good marks...
*?

Poprawiłam takie oczywiste błedy. zastanawiam sie tylko czy nie lepiej by byl gdyby cały tekst był w czasie przeszłym skoro to są arumenety mówiące o tym co robiłeś...ale nie znam do konca kontekstu wypowiedzi... mam nadzieje ze pomogłam. Pozdrawiam i powodzenia
fajna laska musisz być :) taka życzliwa ... niewiele takich .... :*