Wakacje

Proszę o sprawdzenie opisu wakacji:

First I went to Croatia with my parents. there I was swimming and taking sun bath, so it wasn't really interesting. After that I went with Majka on Slot Art Festival in Lubiąż. For five days we were living in tent. In the morning we were going on workshops and seminars and in the evening we were walking around Lubiąż, watching film in slot-cinema, or listening to music.
When we were back at home we met few times.

Z góry dzięki.

There I was swimming and 'taking A sun bath' (tak, ale tylko small twittering birds take sun baths - toy were SUNBATHING) , so it wasn't really interesting. After that I went with Majka 'on' (czy to ma byc odpowiednik polskiego 'na'- jak tak, to TO) THE Slot Art Festival in Lubiąż. For five days we were
living in A tent. In the morning we 'were going' WENT 'on' TO workshops and seminars and in the evening we 'were walking' WALKED (akcja sie skonczyla, teraz nie jestes w trakcje akcji) around Lubiąż, watching A film in
THE slot-cinema, or listening to music.
When we 'were' CAME back 'at' (niepotr) home we met A few times.

Dzięki, ale mi chodziło o to, że przez pięć dni chodziłyśmy na warsztaty i itd.

przeczytalam jeszcze raz moja wersje, i ja to tak czytam.