Krotki tekst do sprawdzenia, dziekuje

Witam wszystkich serdecznie. Musialem napisac maly tekst na temat plusow internetu. Wiem, ze to jest malo ale mial byc takiej dlugosci tekst, na tak szeroki temat mozna nawet kilka stron a4 napisac.
Wiec prosze was o sprawdzenie tego krotkiego tekstu, dziekuje z gory.

Nowadays people without using internet is very hard to imagine.
The internet as source of information helps many people to
solve their problems. Many people search their future partner on
several services and they exchange their experiences about relationships.
In few steps you can find your dream partner. You have to only fill a form,
which include your character of your dreamy partner. Another positive aspect ,
which made our life better was connection to each others. One of it is for example a forum.
There you can make conversations about many things like crank issues, which interest us.
Also you can find new contacts and maybe find your new hobbies. By communicators you are able to
connect with people, who live in other countries. You can also call many people and it is
mostly cheaper than classic way to call someone. By using internet we are feeling a luxury,
because we have access to information. What we mustn't forget is that internet makes us independent and flexible.

>Nowadays, OUR LIFE without using Internet is very hard to imagine.
>The Internet as THE source of information helps many people to
>solve their problems. Many people (powt.) search their future partner on
>several services (szukają na kilku serwisach? czy mają rozne portale do wyboru? slowo service chyba nie moze byc uzyte w tym kontekscie, znajdz inne) and they exchange their experiences about
>relationships.
>[In few steps] (nie znam takiego wyrazenia) you can find PARTNER OF YOUR DREAMS. You ONLY have to fill a
>form,
>which includeS your character of your dreamy partner(twoj charakter twojego idealnego partnera?). (nowy akapit?) Another positive
>aspect,
>which made our life better was connection to each other. One of it
>is for example a forum.
>There you can make conversations about many things like [crank issues](nie znam takiego wyrazenia),
>which interest us.
>Also you can find new contacts (friends?) and maybe find your new hobbies. By
>communicators you are able to
>connect with people who live in other countries. You can also call
>people and it is
>mostly cheaper than a classic way to call someone. By using Internet we
>are feeling a luxury,
>because we have access to information. What we CAN'T forget is
>that the Internet makes us independent and flexible.

Nowadays, OUR LIFE without using THE Internet (mozna tez napisac:without THE USE OF to the Internet) is very hard to imagine.
>The Internet as A source of information THAT helps many people to
>solve their problems. Many people (powt.) CAN search FOR their future partner on
>several (different) and they CAN SHARE their experiences about (these kind of)
>relationships.
>(WITH A few CLICKS OF THE MOUSE) you can find THE PARTNER OF YOUR DREAMS. You ONLY have to fill OUT a
>form,
>which includeS THE DESIRED QUALITIES and character of your dream partner.((nowy akapit?) Another positive
>aspect,
>which made our life better was THE IMPROVED connection WITH each other. One example of THIS
>is an (internet) forum.
>There, you can DISCUSS many things like [crank issues???] >which interest us.
>Also you can find new contacts (friends?) and maybe find SOME new hobbies. By
>communicators?? you are able to
>connect with people who live in other countries. You can also call
>people (over the Internet)and it is
> USUALLY cheaper than THE TRADITIONAL way to call someone. By using THE Internet we
>are (feeling a luxury?? ...nie rozumiem)
>because we have access to information. What we CAN'T forget is
>that the Internet makes us independent and flexible.