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Nowadays many people say that unemployment is a very big problem in our country. Both young people as experienced old people.
It is really big problem our times, because young people who have no money, no prospects, no aim in life and nothing to do, may become criminals, join a sect or a terrorist organization, however old people feel alienated and depressed, and they lose a sense of purpose in life.
Because searching job are so difficult I would like to show there various ways of looking for a job.
~The most frequent are from your friends or other people. People apply for jobs recommended or brought to their notice by their friends, family and acquaintances, possibly where these people work themselves.
~Second way of looking for a job are advertisements. Employers advertise vacancies in papers or magazines, sometimes in special supplements dedicated to job vacancies, and deal with the job seekers who respond with an application or asking for further particulars. The job seeker can place an advertisement themselves, in which they usually give their qualifications, experience and the kind of work they are interested in, and then wait to see if any employers reply.
~Jobless people also can find a job through the labour office or job centre. Employers report their vacancies to labour offices. Job seekers come there and look at the displayed vacancies on their own or with the help of a placement adviser for jobs, to see which would suit them and correspond to their qualifications. Then may follow a personal contact between the job seeker and the employer.
~I think that search job through a recruitment agency is also good idea. Employers use the services of specialized personnel recruitment agencies, which select suitable workers to meet the criteria required by the employers for particular jobs. Employers often demand high qualifications from their workers. They want to have the right people in the right places and that is why they take the advice of an interviewer who helps choose the best candidates.
~Searching on the Internet for me are the best comfortable way of looking for a job. There are many web sites offering jobs, structured according to different fields of work or by region.
Recapitulate jobless people have many ways of looking for a job.
If you want something badly enough, you'll get it.

Nowadays many people say that unemployment is a very big problem in
'our' (a 'our' country to ktore?) country. 'Both young people as WELL as experienced old people.' (to niestety nie jest zdaniem)
It is really A big problem IN our times, because young people who have no
money, no prospects, no aim in life and nothing to do, may become
criminals, join a sect or a terrorist organization, however old people
feel alienated and depressed, and they lose a sense of purpose in
life.
'Because' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'because') searching FOR 'job are so difficult' (nie, albo 'searching for a JOB, albo 'searching for jobs' - nie mieszaj!) I would like to show THAT there ARE various ways of looking for a job.
The most frequent (ale co?) are from your friends or other people. People apply
for jobs recommended or brought to their notice by their friends,
family and acquaintances, possibly where these people work
themselves.

I think that searchING FOR A job through a recruitment agency is also A good
idea.
Searching on the Internet for me 'are' (are a pozniej 'way - dlaczego to sie nie laczy?) the best comfortable way of looking for a job.
'Recapitulate' (slowo nie pasuje do reszty) jobless people have many ways of looking for a job.

Widze, ze sama napisalas tylko czesc tego, a reszte 'pozyczylas' z innego zrodla. Nie rob tego, bo to widac jak byka.

dziękuję terri...
Tak niestety "pożyczyłam" część z innego źródła bo nie potrafiłam napisać tego sama lepiej... :/ może masz jakiś pomysł jak to napisać/zmienić żeby nie wyglądało jak wygląda ??

Nowadays many people say that unemployment is a very big problem in Poland. Both young people as well experienced old people can’t find a job..
It is really a big problem in our times, because young people who have no money, no prospects, no aim in life and nothing to do, may become criminals, join a sect or a terrorist organization, however old people feel alienated and depressed, and they lose a sense of purpose in life.
Searching for a job are so difficult I would like to show that there are various ways of looking for a job.
~The most frequent are from your friends or other people. People apply for jobs recommended or brought to their notice by their friends, family and acquaintances, possibly where these people work themselves.
~Second way of looking for a job are advertisements. Employers advertise vacancies in papers or magazines, sometimes in special supplements dedicated to job vacancies, and deal with the job seekers who respond with an application or asking for further particulars. The job seeker can place an advertisement themselves, in which they usually give their qualifications, experience and the kind of work they are interested in, and then wait to see if any employers reply.
~Jobless people also can find a job through the labour office or job centre. Employers report their vacancies to labour offices. Job seekers come there and look at the displayed vacancies on their own or with the help of a placement adviser for jobs, to see which would suit them and correspond to their qualifications. Then may follow a personal contact between the job seeker and the employer.
~I think that searching for a job through a recruitment agency is also a good idea. Employers use the services of specialized personnel recruitment agencies, which select suitable workers to meet the criteria required by the employers for particular jobs. Employers often demand high qualifications from their workers. They want to have the right people in the right places and that is why they take the advice of an interviewer who helps choose the best candidates.
~Searching on the Internet for me are the best comfortable way (way-ing ?? tutaj nie wiem :/) of looking for a job. There are many web sites offering jobs, structured according to different fields of work or by region.
Summing up jobless people have many ways of looking for a job.
If you want something badly enough, you'll get it.

It is really a big problem in our times, because young people who have
no money, no prospects, no aim in life and nothing to do, may become
criminals, join a sect or a terrorist organization, 'however' (zrob to inaczej...whilst on the other hand,) old people feel alienated and depressed, and they lose a sense of purpose in life.
Searching for a 'job are' (DLACZEGO dajesz 'job' co jest l. poj,a wtedy czasownik l. mnogiej 'are' -popraw- to sa podstawowe rzeczy) so difficult I would like to show that there are various ways of looking for a job.
The most frequent (ALE CO? - znowu nie napisalas, dlaczego nie uznajesz moich poprawek?) are from your friends or other people.
Searching on the Internet for me 'are' (i znowu to samo, przeciez jak dajesz l. mnoga czasownika 'are' to nie mozesz dawac 'way' ktora jest l. poj rzeczownika, czy was juz NIKT nie uczy rozpoznawac l. poj od l. mnogiej!!!) the best comfortable way of looking for a job.

Nowadays many people say that unemployment is a very big problem in Poland. Both young people as well experienced old people can’t find a job..
It is really a big problem in our times, because young people who have no money, no prospects, no aim in life and nothing to do, may become criminals, join a sect or a terrorist organization, whilst on the other hand old people feel alienated and depressed, and they lose a sense of purpose in life.
Searching for a job is so difficult I would like to show that there are various ways of looking for a job.
~The most frequent are the following from your friends or other people. People apply for jobs recommended or brought to their notice by their friends, family and acquaintances, possibly where these people work themselves.
~Second way of looking for a job are advertisements. Employers advertise vacancies in papers or magazines, sometimes in special supplements dedicated to job vacancies, and deal with the job seekers who respond with an application or asking for further particulars. The job seeker can place an advertisement themselves, in which they usually give their qualifications, experience and the kind of work they are interested in, and then wait to see if any employers reply.
~Jobless people also can find a job through the labour office or job centre. Employers report their vacancies to labour offices. Job seekers come there and look at the displayed vacancies on their own or with the help of a placement adviser for jobs, to see which would suit them and correspond to their qualifications. Then may follow a personal contact between the job seeker and the employer.
~I think that searching for a job through a recruitment agency is also a good idea. Employers use the services of specialized personnel recruitment agencies, which select suitable workers to meet the criteria required by the employers for particular jobs. Employers often demand high qualifications from their workers. They want to have the right people in the right places and that is why they take the advice of an interviewer who helps choose the best candidates.
~Searching on the Internet for me is the best comfortable way of looking for a job. There are many web sites offering jobs, structured according to different fields of work or by region.
Summing up jobless people have many ways of looking for a job.
If you want something badly enough, you'll get it.

jeszcze coś jest nie tak ??

Zapomniałaś (lub nie wiesz) o najefektywniejszym sposobie szukania pracy: networking.

Nowadays many people say that unemployment is a very 'big' (mozna tutaj zastosowac inne slowo, np 'grave') problem in Poland. Both young people as well AS experienced old people can't find a job..
...The most frequent are the following from your friends or other people.(to zdanie mi sie nie podoba...)
Searching on the Internet for me is the 'best' (zle slowo- chyba mialas na mysli MOST) comfortable way of looking for a job.

A czy tak było by dobrze ??



There are many different ways of looking for a job, and many of them are great.
First of all, the most popular way of looking for a job is to ask your friends or familiar (znajomi). There are many job offers, which are no declared publicly (ogłaszanych publicznie). These offers are transferred by informal contacts. It concerns it in main measure of work not requiring qualification, but not always.
Second good way for searching for a job and the most popular is press announcements. Person which looks for a job can fast and easy have access to a big amount (ilość) of offers. If someone chooses that way, he or she must to count with numerous people applying for the same position.
Next great way for searching for a job is Internet. It is possible to have fast and simply access to many job offers. Beside if you log in a special page you can make your CV available to many employers, which can send you a proposition of job.
Radio and television is also a media, which render accessible (udostępniać) job offers. They are not that much popular, but nothing stands on barrier, in order to find work due their equipment. Announcements appear in local broadcasting stations most often and in the local television. There are also programs in television, which helps people find a job.
Next very popular place for looking for a job is office of work. There are intermediaries (pośrednicy) in each office, which try to adjust qualification of people registered in office to job offers. You can count on that the intermediary will call us if he finds something for us. Offices of work often organize employment exchanges (giełdy pracy). It consist on (polegać na) meetings employers and people applying for a job. Offices render accessible computer positions with access to internet for job search often too. It is also possible to read newspaper with offers there. There are also clubs of work or workshops of job searches, supports, activation.
Agencies of mediation of work are more and more popular in Poland. They are based on searching of employee, which grant employers expectation (spełniają wymagania). They have database of people applying for a job. They carry preliminary recruitment and selections (przeprowadzają wstępną rekrutację i selekcję) and present to employers. In this way there are often searching people with high qualification, but not always.
Next good ways of looking for a job are practices and voluntary. It is good way to conquest (zdobyć) experience and maybe in future work in the company or institution where we had a practice.
The time that goes by from need of employment of new employers and advertisement is very long (it is count between 2 weeks and 6 months) and many of the advertisement are never declared publicity. This is the reason that people should send their CV to the company they want to work with, maybe they will employ someone.
Work in small and medium companies or public institution we can find by personal contact with employer. There is simpler way to have a contact with person who is responsible for requirements than in big corporations, but I take time. We have a chance of make good impression and due to it boost (zwiększyć) your chances for employment.
Trades of work are good manner (sposób) to talk in short time with big amount of employers about capability of work for them. They are often organized by offices or higher schools.
Finally, announcements in shop windows, bars, store and restaurants is also good way to find job. Shops, bars and restaurants are often looking for new employee in that way. In such places we can find an offer ideal for us.
If we try to find job in all this ways and we couldn???t find anything, maybe we should think of self-employment. It is the most requiring kind of employing, but the most satisfy. You can decide where, when and what you want to work.
I think that all of the ways described above are the best. It is hard to find the job we want, so even the one the best of them can fail too.

There are many different ways of looking for a job, and many of them
are 'great' (lepsze slowo SUCCESSFUL.
First of all, the most popular way of looking for a job is to ask your
friends or 'familiar' FAMILY. There are many job offers, which are noT
declared publicly.
It concerns 'it' (niepotr) in THE main measure 'of' (niepotr) work not requiring qualification, but not always.
A second good way 'for' OF searching for a job and the most popular is press
announcements. A person 'which' WHO (jak o ludziach to WHO) looks for a job can 'fast' QUICKLY and easILY have access to a 'big' (nie uzywaj tego slowa, to takie dziecinne-sa lepsze) amount of offers. If someone chooses 'that' THIS way,
he or she must 'to' (niepotr) count 'with' ON numerous people applying for the same position.
THE next great way for searching for a job is BY THE Internet. It is possible to
have fast and 'simply' SIMPLE access to many job offers. BesideS if you log in a
special page you can make your CV available to many employers, 'which' WHO
can send you a proposition of A job.
Radio and television 'is' (ale tutaj wymienilas 2 srodki, dlatego wtedy uzywamy l., mn czasownika ARE) also 'a' (o tym 'a' to musze pomyslec, ale narazie zostaw jak jest) media, which render accessible job offers. They are not that 'much' VERY popular, but nothing stands 'on' (napewno masz na mysli AS A) barrier, in order to find work 'due their equipment' (tego nie rozumiem).
'Announcements appear in local broadcasting stations most often and in
the local television' (napisz to zdsanie inaczej). There are also programMES 'in' ON television, which 'helps' (ale programmes to l. mnoga - tutaj HELP) people find 'a' (niepotr) jobS.
THE next very popular place for looking for a job is 'office of work' (cpos tu nie tak, tego nie rozumiem). There are intermediaries in each office, 'which' WHO try to adjust qualification of people registered in THE office to THE job offers. You can count on THE FACT that the intermediary will call 'us' (ale wczesniej pisalas 'you' czymaj sie jednego) if he finds something for
'us' YOU. 'Offices of work' (zmien to i poszukaj prawidlowego okreslenia) often organize 'employment exchanges' (nie tutaj napisz WORK FAIRS. 'It' THEY consist 'on' OF 'meetings' MEETING employers and people applying for a job. 'Offices' (zmien to) render accessible computer positions with access to THE internet for job search often too. It is also possible to read A newspaper with offers there.
'Agencies of mediation' (poszukaj jak to sie pisze po ang) of work are more and more popular in Poland.
They are based on searching 'of' FOR AN employee, 'which' WHO 'grant' SATISFIES employers expectationS. They have databaseS of people applying for a job. They carry preliminary recruitment and selections and present (CO? tutaj brakuje) to employers. In this way there are often searching FOR people with high
qualification, but not always.
Next good 'ways' WAY of looking for a job are practices and voluntary WORK. It is A good way to 'conquest' (zle slowo) experience and maybe in THE future work in the company or institution where we had 'a' THE practice.
The time that goes by from THE need of employment of new employers and
advertisement is very long ('it is count' IT CAN BE between 2 weeks and 6 months) and many of the advertisementS are never declared publicity.
'Work in small and medium companies or public institution we can find' (zacznij to zdanie inaczej...We can find work in....) by personal contact with THE employer. There is NO simpler way to have a contact with THE person who is responsible for 'requirements' (tutaj daj slowo RECRUITMENT than in big
corporations, but 'I take time' (cos tu nie tak). We have a chance of makING A good impression and due to it boost 'your' (nie mieszaj, jak piszesz 'we' to dalej trzymaj sie tgo, a nie raz 'we' a wtedy 'you') chances for
employment.
'Trades of work' WORK FAIRS are A good 'manner' WAY to talk in A short AMOUNT of time with 'big' (nie uzywaj tego, poszukaj odpowiednie na taki tekst)
amount of employers about THE capability of workING for them. They are often
organized by offices or higher schools. (Nawet ja raz bylam na takim w AGH)
Finally, announcements in shop windows, bars, storeS and restaurants 'is' ARE (bo jak piszesz announcements-l. mnoga, to potrzebujesz czasownika l. mn)
also A good way to find A job. Shops, bars and restaurants are often
looking for new employeeS in that way. In such places we can find an
offer ideal for us.

Prosze zauwazyc, ze kazde zdanie gdzie brakuje przwedimka jest niegram. i do tego mieszasz l. poj a l. mnoga.
>If we try to find job in all this ways and we couldn???t find
>anything, maybe we should think of self-employment. It is the most
>requiring kind of employing, but the most satisfy. You can decide
>where, when and what you want to work.
>I think that all of the ways described above are the best. It is hard
>to find the job we want, so even the one the best of them can fail

If we try to find A job in all 'this' THESE (bo ways to l. mnoga) ways and we 'couldn???' CAN'T find anything, maybe we should think of self-employment. It is the most 'requiring' (zle slowo- tego nie rozumiem) kind of 'employing' EMPLOYMENT, but OFTEN the most satisfyING. You can decide where, when and 'what' HOW you want to work.
...to find the job we want, so even 'the one the best' (cos tu nie tak) of them can fail

Terri dziękuję bardzo za pomoc, a teraz ?? lepiej ??

There are many different ways of looking for a job, and many of them are successful.
First of all, the most popular way of looking for a job is to ask your friends or family. There are many job offers, which are not declared publicly (ogłaszanych publicznie). These offers are transferred by informal contacts. It concerns in main measure of work not requiring qualification, but not always.
Second good way for searching for a job and the most popular is press announcements. Person who looks for a job can quickly and easily have access to a huge amount (ilość) of offers. If someone chooses this way, he or she must count on numerous people applying for the same position.
The next great way for searching for a job is by the Internet. It is possible to have fast and simple access to many job offers. Besides if you log in a special page you can make your CV available to many employers, who can send you a proposition of a job.
Radio and television are also a media, which render accessible (udostępniać) job offers. They are not that very popular, but nothing stands as a barrier, in order to find work due their equipment. Announcements appears in local stations most often and in the local television. There are also programmes on television, which help people find jobs.
The next very popular place for looking for a job is employment agency (urząd pracy, ale tak nie może być bo tak samo są agencje zatrudnienia). There are intermediaries (pośrednicy) in each office, who try to adjust qualification of people registered in the office to the job offers. You can count on the fact that the intermediary will call you if they finds something for you. Employment agencies often organize work fairs (giełdy pracy). They consist of (polegać na) meeting employers and people applying for a job. Employment agency render accessible computer positions with access to internet for job search often too. It is also possible to a read newspaper with offers there. There are also clubs of work or workshops of job searches, supports, activation.
Employment agencies (agencje pośrednictwa) are more and more popular in Poland. They are based on searching for an employee, who satisfies employers expectations (spełniają wymagania). They have databases of people applying for a job. They carry preliminary recruitment and selections (przeprowadzają wstępną rekrutację i selekcję) and present it to employers. In this way there are often searching for people with high qualification, but not always.
Next good way of looking for a job are practices and voluntary work. It is good way to conquest (zdobyć) experience and maybe in the future work in the company or institution where we had the practice.
The time that goes by from the need of employment of new employers and advertisement is very long (it can be between 2 weeks and 6 months) and many of the advertisements are never declared publicity. This is the reason that people should send their CV to the company they want to work with, maybe they will employ someone.
We can find work in small and medium companies or public institution by personal contact with the employer. There is no simpler way to have a contact with the person who is responsible for requirement than in big corporations, but I takes time. We have a chance of making a good impression and due to it boost (zwiększyć) our chances for employment.
Trades of work fairs are good way to talk in a short amount of time with huge amount of employers about the capability of working for them. They are often organized by offices or higher schools.
Finally, announcements in shop windows, bars, stores and restaurants are also a good way to find a job. Shops, bars and restaurants are often looking for new employees in that way. In such places we can find an offer ideal for us.
If we try to find a job in all this ways and we couldn???t a find anything, maybe we should think of self-employment. It is the most requiring kind of employing, but the most satisfy. You can decide where, when and what you want to work.
I think that all of the ways described above are the best. It is hard to find the job we want, so even the one the best of them can fail.