Proszę o sprawdzenie :)

1. I think it's not truth that only fame and moneybring happiness, because we need also health, loving family, close friends and luck. In my opinion money and fame therefore are only addition to all these. (?) (może pomożecie mi wymyślić jakieś zakończenie? :)

2. I think the press should write about the lives of famous people only, when they agree with this. When they don't agree (?), the press should respect it, because each person has right to have private life and real fan should esteem his idol for his works.

3. I think that famous footballers and pop singers get do much money, because their job is less responsible and dangerous than a lot of other professions though certainly requires lots of exercises.

4.I think the government should tax very rich people a lot more. It's difficult decision, because they would to (?) say that they became rich thanks their hard work, but poor people very often hadn't chance to earn a lot of money and in this way come into being (? - powstaje) precipise between rich and poor people.

5. I think the government should have more control over newspaper, TV and Internet to eliminate agression and pornography, however each person should have an opportunity to express his opinion, which don't offened nobody.

Proszę o pomoc:)

1. I think it's not 'truth' TRUE that only fame and money bring happiness,
because we need also health, loving family, close friends and luck. In
my opinion (daj tutaj threrefore) money and fame are only AN (dlaczego wy zapominacie o tych malych slowach jak 'a','an' i 'the'?) addition to all these.
2. I think the press should ONLY write about the lives of famous people
'only', when 'they' (ale do kogo to 'they' sie odnosi-the press, czy famous people-nie jest jasne) agree with this. When they don't agree, the press
should respect 'it' (napisz 'their view), because each person has THE right to have A (i znowu zapominasz !!!) private life and A real fan should 'esteem' (slowo ok ale sie tutaj nie nadaje) his idol for his works.
3. I think that famous footballers and pop singers get 'do' (zle slowo tutaj TOO much money, because their job is less responsible and LESS dangerous than a lot of other professions, (przecinek) though certainly IT requires 'lots of' (poszukaj lepsza formulacje-) exercises.
4.I think THAT the government should tax very rich people a lot more.(ale musisz tutaj napisac kogo uwazasz za 'very rich, daj kwoty zarobku) It's
A difficult decision, because they would 'to' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego slowa tutaj) say that they became rich thanks TO their hard work, but poor people very often 'hadn't' DO NOT HAVE A chance to earn a lot of money and in this way 'come into being precipise(ortog)'(zla kol slow) between THE rich and THE poor people.
5. I think THAT the government should have more control over newspaperS, TV
and Internet to eliminate agression and pornography, however each
person should have an opportunity to express his opinion, which 'don't' (co to za jakies nowosiegajace kleski z tym 'don't-to jest kolokw- napisz to prtawidlowo) offened 'nobody' ANYBODY (poczytaj o roznicy pomiedzy 'nobody' a 'anybody').

Dziękuję! :)

A, mam jeszcze kilka pytań... Czy esteem mogę zastąpić value (punkt 2)?
Punkt 3 - ...requires MANY exercises? I w 4 niestety nie wiem jaka ma być kolejność...

3. ...IT requires 'lots of'...mialam tu na mysli 'vigorous', 'constant', exercises.
4....but poor people very often 'hadn't' DO NOT HAVE A chance to earn a lot of money and in this way
...'come into being precipice'.... czy myslisz, ze to jest dobrze? pewnie ze nie. Tutaj masz napisac najpierw 'co'? i 'co z tym sie robi'...a precipice emerges between...

Ok, dzięki.