Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie. Będę ogromnie wdzięczna, bo wiem, że są błędy, ale już nie jestem ich w stanie wyłapać.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to your advertisement for volunteer. I would like to apply for the work as volunteers. My name is XYZ and I am twenty four years old. I am from Poland and I graduated from Department of English Philology in Warsaw with distinction.
First of all I would like to childcare and assist the schools for example work with disadvantaged and vulnerable children. However very important social problems are bound up with poverty and unemployment. I want to express my strong interest of these problems.
In addition I would be interested in work in South Africa. I would like to work in the period from June to October.
Furthermore there are advantages of this work. Volunteers are very sensitive in the human injury. I will have satisfaction from help working as an volunteer. Also this is a big chance for my scientific development. It will be very important for my professional qualification.