Dziękuję bardzo! Nie byłam świadoma tego, że robię tyle prostych (wręcz głupich) błędów.
Po poprawie błędów wyszło mi:
It was A rainy night. Caterine and James were walking down the street when suddenly they saw A strange man in the way.
The man stood in front of A couple and yelled "Stop! Give me your money!". Caterine started to weep and gave her wallet to the thug.
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Then, criminal run away. Unexpectedly Caterine saw him fall down. When she came up closer to him, she noticed the man was unconscious, so she took away her wallet out of him. All at once Caterine awoke and said "It was just a bad dream!" At noon she broke up with her boyfriend James.
Zostawiłam awoke, ponieważ nie wiem czy po "to" coś konkretnego musi być, czy wystarczy "Caterine awoke to and said..."
**Jeżeli chodzi o "At the same time James run but near the place when event was happened he passed out" może "At the same time James darted. After a while he swooned"
"he got his walking ticket"
yeeees :)