krotki tekst, wazne, balagam o sprawdzenie !!

jutro mam spr z e-mail i wymyslilam sobie pyt i napisalam o tym . tylko ze ktos musi mi to sprawdzic (taka zabawa z nauczyciela ) :P i prosilabym was o to aby poprawic moje bledy i podpowiedziec cos cos zmienic :)

ZAD. napisz do kolezanki z wloch ze chcesz odwiedzic jej kraj i popros ja o rade w e-mailu umiesc info : 1.dlaczego piszesz 2. jaki miesiac jes najlepszy 3.co warto zobaczyc 4.jakimi srodkami transportu sie poruszac

hi Laura
Thanks for your a all e-mails, I hope your exam went very well . I have some a interesting news and I'm writing to you because I want to go on holiday to italy next year . i can only com to visited two weeks. do you think I should visit ? which places and buildings ? which month is the best come to visited your country ? i must have a transport. do you think I should hire a car or travel around by bus or train but i think should save a money.

I'm planning to spend activitis them. I should visited museums, church, beach and colourful landspaces because I want did a lot of photo. i must book a hotel. do you recommended a good and cheap the hotel in the centre ?
Hope hear from you soon
best wishes
xyz

I co myslicie o tym ??

hi Laura
>Thanks for your a all e-mails, I hope your exam went very well .
Thanks for all your emails....(nie your all)

I
>have some a interesting news and I'm writing to you because I want to
>go on holiday to italy next year .
some interesting news (bez a, już "some" masz, a przed news i tak się "a" nie stawia)

i can only com to visited two
>weeks.
I can only come for two weeks.

visited to czas przeszły/imiesłów bierny

which places and buildings ?
Ale co?
Which places and buildings should I see?

>which month is the best come to visited your country ?
Ty cos masz z tym come to visited :)

Which month is the best to come visit your country?

i must have a
>transport.
bez a

do you think I should hire a car or travel around by bus or
>train but i think should save a money
kropka po train.
bez but i bez a

masz błędy to na pewno. nie jestem super dobra, ale parę potrafię wyłapać ;)

hi Laura
Thank you for all your e-mails. I hope your exam went very well . I
have some interesting news and I'm writing to you because I wanna
go on holiday to italy next year . i can only come to visited two
weeks. do you think it's a good idea? which places and buildings should I visit?
which month is the best come to visit your country ? I think about a
transport. do you think I should hire a car or travel around by bus or
train? I think travel by bus or train is cheaper.

I'm planning to spend activitis them. I want to visit museums,
churches, beach and colourful landspaces because I want to do a lot of
photo. i must reserve a room in a hotel. do you recommended a good and cheap the
hotel in the centre ?
Hope hear from you soon
best wishes
xyz

na pewno nie jest dokładnie, ale się starałam :)

o, "wanna" na forum wróciło :)

Dawno nie było tego ohydztwa.

a "gonna" nie bylo?

>I'm planning to spend activitis them.
To zdanie w ogóle nie ma sensu. Napisz po polsku co chciałas wyrazić.

I should visited museums,
>church, beach and colourful landspaces because I want did a lot of
>photo.

nie visited! tylko?

do you recommended a good and cheap the
>hotel in the centre ?
Może lepiej Can you recommend (recommended to czas przeszły!)

dwa przedimki wstawiłas przed hotel - a i the. Wystarczy tylko a good and cheap hotel...

jesli stawiasz przymiotniki przed reczownikiem, to przedimek idzie przed przymiotnik(i) i przed rzeczownikiem juz nic nie potrzeba

>Hope hear from you soon
Hope TO hear...


and colourful landspaces because I want did a lot of
>photo.
colourful landspaces? niby wiem co to, ale jakies dziwne

po angielsku zdjecia sie bierze a nie robi (do) - a did to czas przeszly. cos Ci sie tu wszystko miesza.

because I want TO wziąć/zabrać a lot of photos

gonna własnie też dawno nie było. Myslałam, że towarzystwo się już wyedukowało, a tu zonk. wanna wróciło.