rozprawka bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie :)

The role of woman in modern society has changed In the recent years. More and more of them decide to give up taking care their house and start to own's career working. This solution has as many opponents as followers.
There is no denying that every woman should have a choice to self-sulfillment. Thanks to work in a interesting company with creative team she can widen their interests. Moreover, one salary is often not enough and woman have to work full time in irder for the family to be able to pay the costs of living. An equally important advantage is fact that woman who working has more self-esteem. She is confident and .. (przebojowe - nie wiem jak to bedzie :))
On the other hand many people consider that place of woman is in their house. Children whose mothers have full time job are believed to suffer from emotional disturbances. Secondly, the workplace is usually not flesible enough for working mothers puts an unbearable strain on women who are trying to reconcile family and work.
On balance it seem that being a working mother has as many disadvantages as positive aspects, The decision of whether to take on a job or stay at home remains a matter of personal choice.

z gory dziekuje za korekte bledow :)

*flexible nie flesible dopiero teraz zauwazylam :)

The role of 'woman' (generalnie tutaj powinno byc 'women') in modern society has changed in 'the' (niepotr) recent years.
More and more of them decide to give up taking care (tu cos brakuje) their house and start 'to own's' (tego nawet nie rozumiem) 'career working' (zla kol slow). This 'solution' (jaka solution, tutaj nigdzie nie napisales ze to jest jakis problem-gdzie jest problem?) has as many opponents as followers.
There is no denying that every woman should have a choice 'to' (zle slowo)
self-'sulfillment' (ortog). Thanks to (tu cos brakuje) work in 'a' (zly przedimek, pomysl jaka jest litera po nim) interesting company with
(tu cos brakuje) creative team she can widen their interests. Moreover, one salary is often not enough and (tu cos brakuje) woman 'have' (woman have? pomysl o tym i popraw) to work full time in 'irder' (ortog) for the
family to be able to pay the 'costs of living' (nie za bardzo...daj tutaj everyday expenses). An equally important advantage is (tu cos brakuje) fact that (tu cos brakuje) woman who (tu cos brakuje) working has more self-esteem. She is confident and .. ('przebojowe' (nie rozumiem co to slowo znaczy po polsku)
On the other hand many people consider that 'place of woman' (mowimy o tym inaczej...a woman's place) is in their 'house' (tutaj daj HOME. Children whose mothers have full time 'job' (tutaj l. mn) are believed to suffer from emotional disturbances. Secondly, the workplace is usually not 'flesible' (ortog) enough for working mothers (tu cos brakuje) puts an unbearable strain on
women who are trying to reconcile family and work.
On balance it 'seem' SEEMS that being a working mother has as many disadvantages as positive aspects.