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I live in .... .Area where I live is very quiet and beautifull. There are forest so it is very green, but I think there isn't enough shops.My house is a bungalow with bright yellow walls.In my house it is four bedroom, kitchen bathroom and living room.In the kitchen it's long table where me and my family eat dinner together.In the living room with orange walls and big windows we watch TV.In christmas always there is standing christmas tree.About my house I like big garden. I can relax there and read a book for example.In my house it's a lot of plants because my mum loves it.I don't want to change anything in my house but I would like to live in warmer country because in Poland it's rain too much.

expertem jesli chodzi o error correction nie jestem ale moze cos pomoge:

I live in .... . [The] area where I live is very quiet and beautiful [jedno l]. There are forest [there are forests albo there is a forest] so it is very green, but I think there isn't [shops? liczba mnoga? no to aren't] enough shops. My house is a bungalow with bright yellow walls. In my house it [there]
is four bedroom, kitchen[,] bathroom and [a] living room. In the kitchen it's [there is] [a] long table where me and my family [my family and I] eat dinner together. In the living room with orange walls and big windows we watch TV. In christmas always there is standing christmas tree [At Christmas, there is always standing a christas tree]. About my house I like big garden [nie wiem co tu chciales powiedziec]. I can relax there and read a book for example. In my house it's [there are] a lot of plants, because my mum loves it [them]. I don't want to change anything in my house, but I would like to live in [a] warmer country [,] because in Poland it's rain too much [because it rains too much in Poland].

moze choc troche pomoglem. aha, pamietaj ze po znakach interpunkcyjnych robimy spacje.

bardzo dziękuje za pomoc a w tym zdaniu "About my house I like big garden."
chciałam powiedzieć że w moim domu najbardziej lubie duży ogród, ale nie wiem jak to napisać.

>>>About my house I like big garden."
napisz to inaczej....The thing that I like about my house, is the fact that it has a big garden.