Witam,
Napisałem prace do szkoły(nieformalny list do kolegi 120-150 słów):
Hi buddy
Thanks ya for this surprise. I’m very happy. Ya really sent me this present which I dreamed
about. I wanna say THANKS to ya again.
Your present is very handy. This guitar is awesome and so professional. And its strings -
nothing more nothing less. I always wanted to be famous guitarist. Now I can reach my dreams.
I’m gonna practice with my new toy 4 no 5 hours a day. And I gotta go on a guitar course, too.
My birthday was good, but not so good as my last birthday. There were lots of people and good
climate but it wasn’t it. I think everybody was jealous about my guitar.
My others presents were different. Some of them were cool and a few were just dumb. E.G.
why someone gave me boot polish? Dunno. It’s gonna be a secret.
Take care
XYZ
Po czym otrzymałem sprawdzoną pracę:
Hi buddy
Thanks ya for this surprise. I’m very happy. Ya really sent me this present which I dreamed
about. I wanna say THANKS again.
Your present is very handy. This guitar is awesome and so professional. And its strings -
nothing more nothing less. I always wanted to be famous guitarist. Now I can reach my dreams.
I’m gonna practice with my new toy 4 no 5 hours a day. And I gotta go on a guitar course, too.
My birthday was good, but not so good as my last birthday. There were lots of people and good
climate but it wasn’t it. I think everybody was jealous about my guitar.
My others presents were different. Some of them were cool and a few were just dumb. E.G.
why someone gave me shoe polish? Dunno. It’s gonna be a secret.
Take care
XYZ
Spytałem się co tu jest nie tak:
1 I wanna say THANKS again. - Dlaczego słowa "to ya" tutaj nie pasowały?
2 Dlaczego użyte prze mnie "boot polish" zostało zmienione na "shoe polish", czym to się różni?
Odpowiedź nauczyciela:
1 TO YA jest najzwyczajniej masłem maslanym, a tracisz w ten sposób niepotrzebnie słowa
2 mówi się shoe polish - tak jest przyjete
Teraz moje pytanie, jak jest poprawnie i dlaczego?