Spradzenie krótkiej historii o zamordowanym kotku

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Mam prośbę kto mógłby mi to sprawdzić. Bo musze się nauczyć na pamięć, a nie wiem czy to dobrze jest...

Some car has hit my cat mortally. It was awful experience. Me and my dad buried him in our garden. One evening my parents went out. I read a little and I went to bed. During the night some strange voices from the garden woke me up. I thought that the homeless cats made that noise, but when I looked throw the window I saw some man I the garden. I was terrified. I hid under my quilt and I decided to be quiet as long as the strange will be still there. In the morning I went out to the garden to check what the man had searched. Everything seems normally. Suddenly I saw….the place where we had buried the dog was different. There was a hole. My dog wasn’t there. But it isn’t everything. The hole was as big as a coffin for the adult.

Ładnie proszę...:)
Mam prośbę kto mógłby mi to sprawdzić. Bo musze się nauczyć na
pamięć, a nie wiem czy to dobrze jest...

Some car has hit my cat mortally. It was awful experience. Me and my
dad buried him in our garden. One evening my parents went out. I read>a little and I went to bed. During the night some strange voices from
the garden woke me up. I thought that the homeless cats made that
noise, but when I looked throw the window I saw some man I the garden.
I was terrified. I hid under my quilt and I decided to be quiet as
long as the strange will be still there. In the morning I went out to
the garden to check what the man had searched. Everything seems
normally. Suddenly I saw....the place where we had buried the cat was
different. There was a hole. My cat wasn't there. But it isn't
everything. The hole was as big as a coffin for the adult.

Ładnie proszę...:)

Ps. Ups!Pomyliłam się, dlatego wklejam jeszcze raz

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