opis zdjęcia. Ważne !

Witam, proszę o sprawdzenie tego opisu zdj:) i o poprawki

On the first photo you see me with my friends in McDonald's near a funny clown.
This photo was took in my sixth birthday.
A girl wear in blue coat it's me.
Beside me are:
Agata, Adam, Mateusz and Martyna.- they are good friends from kinder-garden and primary school.
Then, was really great !!!!


Proszę o poprawienie błędów :)

1. IN the photo, not ON the photo
2. next to a funny clown, powiedzialabym
3. This photo was TAKEN (potrzebujesz past participle) ON my sixth birthday
3. THE girl in THE blue coat IS me
4. they are my good friends
5. It was really great then

wydaje mi sie, ze wtedy juz powinno byc ok.

kindergarTen

...AT McDonald's near THE funny clown.

ja bym powiedziała near A funny clown. Ale jesli chodzi o article, to na sto procent nigdy nie jestem pewna.

to wszystko zalezy, czy jest tylko jedyny 'clown' wtedy THE, czy jest ich wiecej i wtedy 'a'.