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My best holiday I spent in Kozino, in Croatia. Kozino is a small, gentle place situated in the immediate vicinity of Zadar and an ideal destination for all those who look for a quiet holiday. It is a small town having 3 km coastline with beaches and pathways.

I was in Kozino two years ago and it was fantastic. I was able to see some beautiful views e.g. the sea, which was hitting mountains. I was sailing all day with my family and I swam in the Mir lake, which has the most salt of all seas in the world. I was able to see a rock, which was 100 meters high. It was really exciting. Some man from Kozino, who is a diver, gave me shells, which are 50 centimeters long. Kozino is very small and quiet but interesting town. Around it there are many National Parks, e.g. “Kornati” with fantastic faun and flora . I saw beautiful waterfalls and rocks. We ate there many delicious meals and sometimes it shocked us, e.g. some day we had a fish, which was longer than a table in the restaurant. The sea was so clean, blue and warm. On beaches was a lot of small stones, there wasn’t sand, so I had to walk and swim with some sort of shoes.

This holiday was the best of all my holidays and I hope that some day I’ll go again to this beautiful town- Kozino.

>Proszę o sprawdzenie:D Z góry dziękuje! Poz:D

niezle. Jedynie pare usprawnien:

>> town having 3 km coastline..
having 3 km long coastline, lub having 3 kms of coastline..

>> I was able to see..
I saw

>>, which was hitting mountains..
which was crashing against the mountains

> of all seas in the
of all the seas

>Kozino is very small and quiet but interesting town.
although small and quiet K is a very interesting town

faun and
>flora..
flora and fauna

>We ate there many..
There we ate many delicious meals and one day we were shocked to have a fish that was longer..

> On beaches was..
On the beaches were..

> there wasn't sand..
there wasn't any sand/there was no sand

>> with some sort of shoes.
with some sort of shoes on

"The best holiday I've ever spent was in Kozino, in Croatia"

Thanks!