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is an education without exams possible? I think that exams have the pros and cons. Dark side of exams is that exams are connected with stress. We know that strees has very unpleasant symphtoms and may be dangerous for us. People who suffer from stress freqently often suffer from hearts disease. We can't avoid stressful situations sitting the exam. ('przystepujac do egzaminu' nie jestem pewna czy dobrze napisalam) But on the other hand if an education system would be without exams, students may not learn hard enough. Bright side of exams is fact that pupils or students have to learn regularly thereby they are more mobilized to study. It's my piont of view, what's yours?
*any mistakes? please improve me, thx in advance :)

please tell me what form is correct ('z powodu ograniczonego dostepu do szpitali cierpia na roznie choroby')
-they suffer from various diseases due to restricted access to hospitals
- they suffer from various diseases because they don't have a lock-in hospitals.
1. ja bym napisał tak: 'The people who suffer from stress suffer from heart disease(s) more often/frequently.'
2. mówi się 'take/sit/do an exam' - więc dobrze jest
3. po 'on the other hand' winien być ,
4. odrzuć 'pupils' - to znaczy raczej dzieci w podstawówce
5. THE education system
6. Because of/Owing to/Due to restricted access to (w USA dodałabyś tu jeszcze 'the') hospitals, they suffer from various disease(s).

chyba niczego nie ominąłem :)
'The people who suffer from stress suffer from
>heart disease(s) more often/frequently.'

ja bym nie powtarzal:

People who suffer from stress are more prone to heart disease
dzieki :)
I think that exams have the
>pros and cons.

zmienilaby to zdanie --> there are positive and negative aspects of exams (and I would like to discuss them)

'dark side' - nie pisalabym, kojarzy sie z czyms nielegalnym, mrocznym itp (chyba ze tylko mnie ???:)

mozna tu pisac 'on the pros / cons side' - czyli 'do pozytywow/negatywow mozna zaliczyc ...'

>We know that strees has very unpleasant symphtoms and may be
>dangerous for us

We are all aware of those unpleasant, even dangerous, symptoms of stress , namely : ... (i tu mozesz cos wymienic)

>People who suffer from stress freqently often suffer
>from hearts disease.

albo 'frequently', albo 'often'
heart diseaseS ('s' wpisalas w zyłm miejscu)

>We can't avoid stressful situations WHILE / WHICH DEFINITELY IS sitting the
>exam. ('przystepujac do egzaminu' nie jestem pewna czy dobrze
>napisalam) - dobrze napisalas (odn. sit the exam)

>But on the other hand if an education system would be
>without exams, students may not learn hard enough.

NApisałabym : 'Exam-free education system may produce students that are unwilling to learn' (moze ktos ma inny pomysl na to zdanie???)

....tu musze konczyc ..:))

>-they suffer from various diseases due to restricted access to
>hospitals - to wg mnie OK
tam w nawiasie winno być "dodałbym" :P
Jeszcze 1-n blad: But on the other hand if an education system would be... EDUCATIONAL SYSTEM, (NOT education system).
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