is that ok ?

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is that ok ?

One evening Pete and Tabitha decided to go out to the restaurant. They had a tasty meal and they were really enjoying that evening. When they finished their meal waiter brought them a bill. Pete was trying to find his wallet but he realized that he had left it at home, so he left Tabitha and went home. When he got home he realized that he had left money and keys inside the house. He came back to the restaurant and he tried to explain everything to the manager. Unfortunately he didn’t believe him, he was angry and told Pete and Tabitha to wash up all dishes.
One evening Pete and Tabitha decided to go out to (the) A restaurant. They
>had a tasty meal and they (were really enjoying) REALLY ENJOYED that evening. When they
>finished their meal THE waiter brought them (a) THE bill. WHEN Pete was trying to
>find his wallet (but) WYPADA he realized that he had left it at home. (so) he
>left Tabitha and went home TO BRING IT. When he got home he realized that he had
>left HIS money and keys inside the house. He came back to the restaurant
>and (he)WYPADA tried to explain everything to the manager. Unfortunately he
>didn't believe him, he was angry and told Pete and Tabitha to wash up
>all dishes.
a delicious meal
went home to get it
Unfortunately the manager (jesli wstawisz tu "he" to sie trzeba ulamek sekundy zastanawiac kto to jest ten "he") didn't belive him. Kropka. He was angry and told...to do the dishes.