prosze o sprawdzenie :) to na jutro wiec pilne !!

mam taki tekst i chcialabym zeby ktos byl tak mily i sprawdzil czy to wszystko trzyma sie,kupy :D :

One sleep cycle comprises of four stages and last for about 9[tel]minutes. Stage 1: In this stage of sleep, your eyes move back and forth erratically. Often called REM sleep, this stage occurs at about 90-100 minutes after the onset of sleep. Your blood pressure rises and heart rate and respiration speeds up and becomes erratic. Your voluntary muscle are paralyzed. This stage may also be referred to as delta sleep and is the most restorative part of sleep. This is also where the majority of your dreaming occurs.
Stage 2: You are entering into light sleep. This stage is characterized by Non-rapid eye movements (NREM), muscle relaxation and slowed heart rate. The body is preparing to enter into deep sleep.
Stage 3 and 4: Also characterized by NREM, these two stages involves periods of deep sleep with Stage 4 being more intense than Stage 3. Your body temperature drops and muscles relaxes. You are completely asleep.
These stages repeat themselves throughout a night's sleep

We have diferent types of dreams :
Daydream
Studies show that we all have the tendency to daydream an average of 70-120 minutes a day. Day dreaming is classified as a level of consciousness between sleep and wakefulness. It occurs during our waking hours when we let our imagination carry us away. As our minds begin to wander and our level of awareness decreases, we lose ourselves in our imagined scenario and fantasy.
Lucid dreams occurs when you realize you are dreaming in the middle of your dream. "Wait a second. This is only a dream!" Most dreamers wake themselves up once they realize that they are only dreaming. Other dreamers have cultivated the skill to remain in the lucid state of dreaming. They become an active participant in their dream, make decisions in their dreams and influence the dream's outcome without awakening.
A nightmare is a disturbing dream that causes the dreamer to wake up feeling anxious and frightened. Nightmares may be a response to real life trauma and situations. These type of nightmares fall under a special category called Post-traumatic stress nightmare (PSN). Nightmares may also occur because we have ignored or refused to accept a particular life situation. Research shows that most people who have regular nightmares have had a family history of psychiatric problems, bad drug experiences, people who have contemplated suicide, and/or rocky relationships. Nightmares are an indication of a fear that needs to be acknowledged and confronted. It is a way for our subconscious to make up take notice. "Pay attention!
Recurring dreams repeat themselves with little variation in story or theme. These dreams may be positive, but most often they are nightmares. Dreams may recur because a conflict depicted in the dream remains unresolved and ignored. Once you have found a resolution to the problem, your recurring dreams may cease.
Healing dreams serve as messages for the dreamer in regards to their health. Dreams of this nature may be telling the dreamer that he/she needs to go to the dentist or doctor.
Prophetic dreams, also referred to as precognitive dreams, are dreams that seemingly foretell the future. One rational theory to explain this phenomenon is that our dreaming mind is able to piece together bits of information and observation that we normally overlook or that we do not seriously consider. In other words, our unconscious mind knows what is coming before we consciously piece together the same information.
Epic dreams are so huge, so compelling, and so vivid that you cannot ignore them. The details of such dreams remain with you for years, as if your dreamt it last night. These dreams possess much beauty and contain many archetypal symbology

One sleep cycle comprises of four stages and lasts about 90-120 minutes.Stage 1: At this stage of sleep your eyes move back and forth erratically.(Dobrze jeśli chcesz powiedzieć -nieregularnie).Also known as the REM sleep,this stage begins /albo this phase occurs at 90-100 minute since the onset of sleep.Your blood pressure rises and heartbeat and respiration speeds up and becomes erratic.Your (mięśnie szkieletowe? )skeletal muscles are paralyzed( a może tense-napięte?).This stage may be also referred to as delta sleep and is the most restorative part of sleep.This is also when the majority of your dreaming occurs.

C.D.N

Może zwróć się do osoby, która ten tekst napisała, albo tych, które go umieściły na róznych witrynach w Internecie.

http://tinyurl.com/dnhvq

Nie cierpie takich ludzi jak ty.

Stage 2:You are entering light sleep.This stage is characterized by non-rapid eye movements (NREM),relaxation of muscles and slow heartbeat.The body is preparing for entering deep sleep.
Stage 3 and 4:Also characterized by NREM,these two stages involve periods of deep sleep with Stage 4 being more intense than Stage 3. A temperature of your body drops and muscles relax. You are deeply/heavily/sound asleep.
These stages repeat themselves throughout a night's sleep.

We have different (może lepiej-We can distinguish-możemy rożróżnić) different types of dreams:
Daydream
Studies show that we all have a tendency to daydream for 70-120 minutes a day.Daydreaming is classified as a state of cosciousness between the sleep and wakefulness.It occurs during daytime when we let our imagination to carry us away.As our mind begin to to wander and our level of awareness decreases,we lose ourselves in our imagined scenario and fantasy.
Lucid dreams occurs when you realize you are dreaming in the middle of
>your dream. "Wait a second. This is only a dream!" Most dreamers wake
>themselves up once they realize that they are only dreaming. Other
>dreamers have developed the skill to remain in the lucid state of
>dreaming. They become an active participant in their dream, make
>decisions in their dreams and influence the dream's outcome without
>awakening.
>A nightmare is a disturbing dream that causes the dreamer to wake up
>feeling anxious and frightened. Nightmares may be a response to real
>life situations and trauma . This type of nightmares fall under a
>special category called Post-traumatic stress nightmare (PSN).
>Nightmares may also occur because we have ignored or refused to accept
>a particular life situation. Research shows that most people who have
>regular nightmares have had a family history of psychiatric problems,
>bad drug experiences, people who have contemplated suicide, and/or
>stormy relationships. Nightmares are an indication of a fear that needs
>to be acknowledged and confronted. This is a way for our subconsciousness to
>make a notice. "Pay attention!
>Recurrent dreams repeat themselves with little variation in story or
>theme. These dreams may be positive, but most often they are
>nightmares. Dreams may recurr because a conflict depicted in the dream
>remains unsolved and ignored. Once you have found a solution to
>the problem, your recurrent dreams may cease.
>Healing dreams serve as messages for the dreamer in regard to their
>health. Dreams of this nature may be telling the dreamer that he/she
>needs to go to the dentist or doctor.
>Prophetic dreams, also referred to as precognitive dreams, are dreams
>that seemingly foretell the future. One rational theory to explain
>this phenomenon is that our dreaming mind is able to bring together
>bits of information and observation that we normally overlook or that
>we do not seriously consider. In other words, our unconscious mind
>knows what is coming before we consciously bring together the same
>information.
>Epic dreams are so huge, so compelling, and so vivid that you cannot
>ignore them. The details of such dreams remain with you for years, as
>if your dreamt it last night. These dreams possess much beauty and
>contain a lot of an archetypal symbolism.

No,no mitusia,przeholowałaś.Nawet jeżeli uzyjesz tego tekstu to nauczyciel i tak może się później zorientować co zrobiłaś.Wystarczy ten teskt wrzucic w program wyszukiwania plagiatów i masz duuuuży problem.A mądrzy nauczyciel już tego typu programów używają.
Do mg: czujność i refleks warte podziwu.Cóż niektórzy nawet publicznie bezwstydnie dopuszczają się oszustw.A szkoda.Bo zniechęcają do pomocy uczciwym.

Na szczęście czuwają zaufani "moderatorzy", tak ja nieoceniony>mg.

Jak widać na forach językowych takie osoby jak mg są naprawdę potrzebne.

Bezwzględnie zawodowcy są TU mile widziani i potrzebni.Oby nie wydawało im się, że są nieomylni - bo to ich, w pewnym sensie,kompromituje.Profesjonaliści,fachowcy - jak najbardziej:TAK, domorośli 'spece', 100% autorytety, nieomylni "angliści" - zdecydowanie NIE.
Niestety, >mg dał kilkakrotnie próbkę swojej, za wszelką cenę,dominacji intelektualnej, nie zawsze popartej uczciwymi argumentami...

Przyklady?

A czego Ty sie nie stosujesz do dobrej rady, ktora Ci swego czasu dala La Belle ( i cos tam jeszcze, czego nigdy nie zapamietam )?
Pozdrawiam

Ciekawia mnie ludzie

Ech, dobranoc.