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Hello Carmen!
How are you? How did you spend last holidays? I hope you're ok.
At the beginning of the summer I fell out with my parents. They just can't stand my bad behaviour. I had a bad marks at school, my teachers complained of my bad behaviour and I was disobedient a lot to my parents. That's why they grounded me and I stayed at home for the whole holidays. During the holidays I was helping my mum at home, I was tiding at home and I was learning a lot. In August, I opened a Dance School in our town and I was teaching childrens how to dance. This is unbelievable, but It was a really great holidays.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Love,
Eve