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According to the text of Thomas Friedman I think that countries involved in a major global supply chain are unlikely to start war, because people embedded in major global supply chain don’t want to fight in wars which we know from our history. They want to develop and raise standards of living. Other reason not to start a war is consequence of that. If country will start a war it could be extremely cost for them, and the country could be eliminated from global supply chain and fall in crisis (pogrążyć się w kryzysie).
Evolution of global supply chain cause that many countries of the world are parts of something much bigger than their own business. They are connected and addicted from each other.
Dell think that the computer industry deserves more praise than it gets because he believes that this industry is very important in global supply chain and people don’t see and don’t understand the work which they have doing.