Summary about wedding day

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Witam, prosilabym bardzo o sprawdzenie ponizszego 'summary'. Z gory dziekuje.

The article, “Wedding-day weight tests even royal brides” in Calgary Herald, published on 22 March 2011, and written by Misty Harris, states that about 70 per cent of brides, even Kate Middleton, want to lose weight before their big day. As reported the Cornell University, to achieve this, women consume less, do aerobic exercises, drink water, override meals, take pills and minimize calories. Moreover, many of them are inspired by TV shows as “Shedding for the Wedding” and “Bridalplasty” in which women competed to gain pre-nuptial plastic surgery.
As reported the Cornell University - As reported by Cornell University
override meals - skip meals
gain prenuptial - win prenuptial
And..what's up with all the commas...more of them than you can shake a stick at. Clean it up a bit.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htm
thx a lot