B.Prosze o pomoc językową oraz o sprawdzenie tekstu czy jest poprawny ewentualnie prosze o poprawki

That was yesterday at five p.m. I was cleaned my room while I saw stranger man next to my house. He was wear black jacket, blue jeans, and black hat. He smoked during black van drived aroung him. 5 minutes later I saw old woman. She went behing him when Suddenly he picked up gun from his pocket and throw old woman to those van. I called police when my mum run to street. I couldn't belived in what I saw. Around seven p.m. I heard in TV that this man was cryminalist. He escaped from prison in Christmas, when guards celebritions Christus Birthday, but near 21p.m police cautched him and safed old woman. She was cooked them great muffins for help as grandmothers.

'That' THIS 'was' (popraw i napisz slowo zdalo sie) yesterday at five p.m. I 'was' (po co tutaj 'was'? slowo 'cleaned' daje znac ze to bylo w przeszlosci), cleaned my room while I saw (brak przedimka) 'stranger' (zle slowo, tutaj STRANGE) man next to my house. He was 'wear' (popraw) (brak przedimka) black jacket, blue jeans, and (brak przedimka) black hat.
...He smoked during black van 'drived' (popatrz jak to odmieniamy - ale nie tak, tego zdania to w ogole nie rozumiem) 'aroung' (ortog) him....
5 minutes later I saw (brak przedimka) old woman. She went 'behing' (ortog) him when suddenly he picked up (brak przedimka) gun from his pocket and 'throw' (tutaj czas przeszly) (brak przedimka) old woman to 'those' (zle slowo, tutaj l. poj) van. I called (brak przedimka) police when my mum 'run' (zle slowo) ONto (brak przedimka) street. I couldn't 'belived' (tutaj czas teraz) 'in' (niepotr) what I WAS SEEING 'saw' (niepotr). Around seven p.m. I heard 'in' ON (brak przedimka) TV that this man was (brak przedimka) 'cryminalist' (zle slowo). He HAD escaped from prison 'in' AT Christmas, when (brak przedimka) guards WERE 'celebritions' (zla czesc mowy) 'Christus' (popraw) Birthday, but near '21p.m' takie cos nie istnieje, tutaj 9p.m.) (brak przedimka) police 'cautched' (zobacz jak ten czasownik powinnien myc napisany) him and 'safed' SAVED (brak przedimka) old woman. She 'was' (niepotr) cooked them great muffins for THEIR help. 'as grandmothers' (niepotr)

Co z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the) ?.

dzięki ;))