dzisiaj na stronie oke po zalogowaniu udostępnione są dokładne rozpiski z punktami za poszczególne zadania, które się uzyskało. Zdziwiło mnie, że za wypracowanie maturalne dostałem 1/5p za sekcję treść i max za pozostałe. Oto moje wypracowanie maturalne, odtworzone dzień po napisaniu matury:
3. Coraz więcej młodych ludzi decyduje się na równoczesne studiowanie na dwóch
kierunkach. Napisz rozprawkę, w której przedstawisz argumenty za i przeciw podjęciu
takiej decyzji.
Nowadays, there are more and more students that decide to do a degree in more than only one subject. This phenomenon may have a big influence on how our education system and state prosper, thus improving them or resulting in slowing their development down. Since education is very important, we should pay more attention to the occurring problem.
First of all, if a student chooses more than one subject to do a degree in, there is a strain on the state budget. Secondly, the more students want to study a few subjects, the more difficult it gets to get into the university. What is more, if a student decides to do a degree in a few subjects, there is a risk of the lack of time and consequently, the bad results in taken exams.
On the other hand, if there are many ambitious young people, it may be good for our economy. Having a number of well-qualified, hardworking workers is the chance for our country that we can’t waste. Furthermore, if a student chooses more than only one subject to study, it increases the chance of getting a good job in the future. What is more, if a student decides to study a few subjects, they are going places so that they may be satisfied.
On balance, there are as many advantages as disadvantages of doing a degree in more than one subject. Therefore, the decision is up to us.
Prosiłbym o jakieś wskazówki, czym w tej pracy tak nagrzeszyłem :P ( w oryginale było 249 slow/250 dozwolonych, tu jest nieco mniej. )
edytowany przez darkdogg: 30 cze 2011