Pauli, the problem is not your slip-ups of wrong word here and there or minor typos or no links between sentences and such minor details, but the driving force--or lack thereof-- behind your writing and the storyline you want to sell. Please remember: someone has to read it.
I am not proud of myself.
Good. It's promising.
I am disappointed.
No. You are going to pot. You are not escalating.
Again.
Good. Now you are escalating.
I guess, this is the worst feeling ever, when you are not able to fulfill your own expectations,.
You are whimpering. Keep escalating. Ever is out of place.
...to make your dreams come true.
Commonplace. Garbage bin.
No, it’s not truth that i am not able to do it. I do not want to.
I am buying that. (true or the truth)
What frightens me the most?
No, I am not interested. Besides, that's the easy way out of an assignment.
That i make promises and i believe that I’ll attain a long-held ambition, but it doesn’t last long.
This is a mess, grammar-wise and otherwise. To the garbage bin it goes.
After a while i think that maybe it is not worth to sacrife and i should just let this go. Is this so important that i should lose my precious time for that? Is there any reason for which i should do my best and have a go? And the worst is that I claim it’s not a big deal to give up on my goal, target, because nothing happens, no harm is done.
You must finally tell the reader what the heck is your story all about. Who is the hero? (aka subject). I am growing impatient. Goal means target, why both?
This is a bunch of malarkey.
What is this bunch malarky. Please, have mercy. What's your problem?
I hurt myself. I’ll be the one who suffers.
I am happy for you.
Where is this big motivation?
You have lost me here. What motivation, if I may ask after what I have been through here with you?
I told him I follow this premise : impossible is nothing and I claim that when you want something so badly you will get it.
Who is he? I am dying to know. Why would you invert impossible nothing? And how badly your want really is?
You have to work harder and believe in your abilities then you will overcome all the obstacles. All you have to do is pursing a goal no matter how hard it is. You can’t give up.
That's good protestant pluck. I like it in a woman.
i don’t recognize myself. i’ve changed. I have just given up.
Holy. What a downer.