Descriptions- 10 zd -PROSZĘ SPRAWDZCIE-THX

witam,
proszę sprawdzcie czy to jest napisane poprawnie gramatycznie- i czy nie ma błędów - thx

My niece Anna, my sister`s daughter, is seven years old. She`s quite tall for her age (about 130), and very slim my sister thinks she dosen`t eat enough. I think she`s very pretty. She`s blonde, with straight hair and a fringe which is always getting in her eyes. She usually wears jeans and T-shirts-she hates wearing dresses.


My cousin Jim is in his thirties, about 34 or 35. He`s well-built and not exactly fat, short. He`s got dark hair and a beard and moustache. He usually wears formal clothes, dark suit and ties, because he works in a bank.


mam też test z gramatyki , który został umieszczony we wcześniejszym postcie "test-z gramatyki (pp i ppc)", jak się nie boicie gramatyki to proszę Was sprawdzcie-test jest krótki.

My niece Anna, my sister`s daughter, is seven years old. She`s quite tall for her age (about 130 cm), and very slim. My sister says that she doesn`t eat enough. I think she`s very pretty. She has straight, blonde hair and a fringe which always gets in her eyes. She usually wears jeans and T-shirts-she hates wearing dresses.


My cousin Jim is in his thirties, about 34 or 35. He`s well-built but fat. He is also short. He`s got dark hair and a beard and a moustache. He usually wears formal clothes, a dark suit and a tie, because he works in a bank.