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Is it believed that education is the key to succesful life? What is you idea of succes life?

Everybody knows that education is very important thing in our life. The majority of people thinks that it is they key to succesful life. Below I will present some of the prime argument supporting that idea.
First of all, person is what his thoughts make him. Education provides direction to these thoughts.
Secondly,education gives us knowlege of the world around us. It helps us build opinion and have a points of view on thing in life.
Thirdly,education helps us find good and satisfaction work.
Ofcourse, it may not guarantee succes.Higher education must not mean better position.
Altough,education many things makes easier,for example: helps put across.
My idea of succesful life is: be confident whatever you do and no matter how complitaded things may seem to be now,don't get intimidated by it.

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Is it believed that education is the key to succesful life? What is your idea of successful life?

Everybody knows that education is a very important thing in life. The majority of people thinks that it is the key to succesful life. Below I advance some essential arguments supporting that assertion.
First of all, a person is what his thoughts make him. Education provides direction to these thoughts.
Secondly,education gives us knowlege of the world around us. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on different things.
Thirdly, education helps us find good and satisfactory work.
Of course, it may not guarantee succes. Higher education does not mean not mean a better position.
Altough, education many things makes easier, for example, helps put across.
My idea of succesful life is to be confident whatever you do and no matter how complitaded things may seem to be now,don't get intimidated by it.

odnieść sukces - to be successful