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Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić pracę? Wydaje mi sie że jest kilka błędów.

After completing my matriculation i am planning to go to England. I would
like to work there and develop my language skills.

I don't think i will stay there fo long as preffer to come back to my
country after saving some money for IT studies as computing is my main
interest and hobby. I am going to be either web-site developer or IT
technician in the future. I am also considering seeking for a possibilty
to be employed as an junior in a decent IT company to gain essentail
experience and practice.

Among all plans mentioned above i need to find some time for settling
down, create my own family and develop my skills and interests.

Z góry dziękuję.

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