snowman

this is the story of the snowman that saved winter. He fights with the coming spring. the winter was unsually mild. the children made this snowman and during the night it started to get warmer outside.The temperature was risin, the snow, the snowmen and all the whole winter were in danger. the snowman yelled "we will not give winter" and he made some snowballs and started a now fight wit the spring. and he succeeded. winter was back. it was getting freezing again and it was a lot of snow again. The snowman saved winter.

This is the story of the snowman 'that' (tutaj uwazalabym tego 'snowman' jako zywa osobe-wtedy 'who') saved winter.
The temperature was 'risin' (ortog) the snow, the 'snowmen' (czy mowisz tutaj o tym jednym czy generalnie) and all the 'whole winter were in danger' (tego nie rozumiem) . the snowman yelled "we will not give winter (daj tutaj slowo UP)" and he made some snowballs and started a 'now' (ortog) fight 'wit' (ortog) the spring. 'and' (nie zaczynaj nowych zdan z 'and') he succeeded.
it was 'getting' (niepotr) freezing again and 'it' THERE was a lot of snow again. (tutaj mozesz dodac...In this way, ) the snowman saved winter.