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Friendship is very important for everyone. I have lots of friends.
Among those, there is a one person who is my best friend.
She's name is Anna. We have known each other for seventeen years.

Anna is average height and slim. She has got an oval face.
Her eyes are big and brown. Her hair is long and dark. She has got a dark complexion.

Anna has very warm personality. She always smiles. She never lies. Moreover, Anna is a funny person. She always tells me some funny stories. We contact each other frequently. She lives with her family in my village.

Anna works in beauty salon. She is highly qualified beauty therapist.
Anna Loves to travel.

Anna is very compassionate, always willing to lend a helping hand or give a sympathetic ear to other people’s problems. I always share my problems with her.

We all need friends. We need friends whom we can confide because friendship is the most important in life. I hope that friendship my and Anna will continue for many years
she's = she is
a very warm personality
funny = zabawny, użyj: fun
beauty salon, therapist - policzalne
confide in albo trust (bez in)
the most important thing
friendshipmy and Anna - niepoprawne, doslowne tlumaczenie z polskiego

kiklka drobnych bledow dotyczacych przedimkow. Najgorszy blad na samym koncu - z friendship. Dobry poziom A2