proszę o malutkie sprawdzenie :)

czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić to małe zadanko?:
I'll never forget the day when I had my last New Year's Eve. I was with my friends at my collegue, Karolina, in her house. We had a party and that was a great time. It started at 7 p.m. but I began to prepared myself a two hours earlier! Before midnight all the time we were dancing and singing or talking with friends. It brought lot of laughter! Food and driks were delicious! That was too much for we - plenty of cookies, chips and all this unhealthy things have remained. I've met several really nice peaople - it turned out, that we hane similar interests.
At midnight we drank a glass od champagne, wished usself the best and watched fireworks. Unfortunately we didn't have own petards. Or maybe it's good?
After this we further had a great time. the party ended in the morning, but some people left earlier. When I came back home my only think was going sleeping, right away . I was falling asleep very tired and with headache but really happy and glad. That time gave me so much satisfaction and I wish to have alike next year.

chyba nie jest za długie i za truddne :)
dziękuję Wam bardzo z góry :)

I'll never forget the day when I had my last New Year's Eve. I was
>with my friends at my collegue, Karolina, in her house. We had a party
>and that was a great time. It started at 7 p.m. but I had began to
>prepared myself a two hours earlier! Before midnight all the time we
>were dancing and singing or talking with friends. It brought a lot of
>laughter! Food and driks were delicious! That was too much for us -
>plenty of cookies, chips and all this unhealthy things have remained.
>I've met several really nice people - it turned out, that we are interested in similar hobbies(things).
>At midnight we drank a glass of champagne, wished each other the best wishes and
>watched fireworks. Unfortunately we didn't have own petards. Or maybe
> it was better?
>After this we further had a great time. the party ended in the
>morning, but some people left earlier. When I came back home my only
>think was to go sleeping, right now . I was falling asleep because i was tired
>and i had headache but really happy and glad. That time gave me so much
>satisfaction and I wish to have alike next year.

o, dzięki :)

Ja wylapalam jeszcze pare bledow:

I was
>>with my friends at my collegue, Karolina, in her house.
I was with my friends at my colleAgue's (Karolina) house.

It started at 7 p.m. but I had began
>to
>>prepared myself a two hours earlier!
It started at 7p.m. but I had begUn to prepare myself two hours earlier!


Before midnight all the time
>we
>>were dancing and singing or talking with friends.
Before midnight, we were dancing,singing and talking with each other all the time.

all this unhealthy things have
>remained.
...all these unhealthy things. There was a lot of leftovers.

that we have similar interests
tu jest dobrze - we have similar interests

wished each other the
>best wishes and
wished each other all the best


we didn't have own petards
we didn't have our own firecrackers.

After this we further had a great time.
After that we had more of a great time

When I came back home my
>only
>>think was to go sleeping, right now .
...my only thought was to go to sleep right away.

I was falling asleep because
>i was tired
>>and i had headache but really happy and glad.
Iwas so tired that I was just falling asleep.I had a headache,too but was really happy and glad.

I wish to have alike next year.
I wish to have it alike next year.

nie mam czasu na całość, ale ...

czy ta Karolina, to koleżanka z pracy/ po fachu autorki listu??? bo takie jest znaczenia słowa 'colleague'

oj nie, to moja koleżanka nawet nie ze szkoły :)

Wtedy napisz po prostu: at one of our (albo "at my") friend's house albo at my friend Karolina's house.