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Last holiday, my parents, sister and I went to Zakopane and tried bungee jumping. We hadn't jumped bungee before we visited Zakopane.
When we got to Zakopane, my parents went to the Belvedere Hotel. I and my sister visited the city. Next day we went to place, where is the Mario Bungee Jumping Company. We were upset.
First, my parents jumped. It was amazing. Afterwards I jumped. I felt great fear and satisfaction. I was proud of myself. We jumped from 90 meters in height.
By the end of the day, we't both fallen in love with bungee jumping and we didn't want to go to our hotel. Everyone was really tried but wanted to go to do it again!
przedimek przed place, fear
where ... is
we't - ?, poza tym uzyj past simple
Przedimek?
Ojj "we had"
we hadn't had jumped before we visited....
m.in.
I felt great (??) fear - hmm, - lepiej 'I terribly feared/ I was terribly scared of . ..'

at the end of the day we both FELL in love with..
We jumped from 90 meters in height - to jest zle

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