Opis obrazu- sprawdzenie

Witam chciałbym, aby ktoś sprawdził mi opis obrazu Francisca Goyi "Rozstrzelanie powstańców madryckich". mój angielski jest dość słaby więc pewnie będzie duzo błędów.


"The third of May 1808" is one of the most famous masterpiece painted by Francisco Goya. The artist created this painting in 1814. The picture shows incident after revolution against French which were occupating Spain. Joahim Murat- one of the officer of French army gave an order to execute insurgents. In the foreground are soldiers with guns aimed at the convicted. A light of latern is illuminating the people which will die soon. We can see fear on their faces, but one man in white shirt don't scare about death. He is rising his hand and is ready to die with proud. In the background are buildings of sleeping Madrit. (Tu chciałbym napisać, że jest to bardzo dramatyczne ponieważ jedni spokojnie śpią w swoich domach, a drudzy za chwile skończą swój żywot, ale nie wiem nawet jak to napisać). Now we can see this work of art in Prado Museum in Madrit.

"The third of May 1808" is one of the most famous 'masterpiece' (tutaj l. mn. 'masterpieces') painted by Francisco Goya.
The picture shows (brak przedimka) incident after (przedimek) revolution against (przedimek) French 'which' (jak o ludziach to 'who') were occupating Spain. Joahim Murat- one of the officerS of (przedimek) French army gave an order to execute (tu cos brak) insurgents.
A 'light of latern' (daj to inaczej...a lantern light) is illuminating the people 'which' (o ludziach to 'who') will die soon. We can see fear on their faces, but one man in (przedimek) white shirt 'don't scare' (to nie jest po ang - to jest najgorszy jakis kolokw. - tutaj 'is not scared') about death. He is 'rising' (zle slowo) his hand and is ready to die with 'proud' (zle slowo, tutaj 'pride'). In the background are buildings of (dalabym przedimek) sleeping 'Madrit' (ortog). (This is a very dramatic scene, where some people are asleep in their beds, whilst others are awaiting their fate). Now we can see this work of art in (brak przedimka) Prado Museum in 'Madrit' (ortog.)
Zrob cos z tymi przedimkami (a, an, the)!!!

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