First for all modern technology 'facilitate' (tutaj ma byc czasownik 3os.l.poj) 'acces' (blad ortog.) to information. Thanks to (ale czego? trzeba napisac), we can 'chceck' (ortog) information faster. For example we can check information about world ewents' (ortog), for educational purposes.
Moreover modern technology 'promote' (3os.l.poj) communication. Thanks to (ale czego? Kto tak nauczyl Cie pisac?), we can maintain contact 'witch' (ortog) (brak przedimka) 'oquaintance' (ortog) who 'live' (3os.l.poj) at (przedimek) opposite 'ends' (l. poj) of the country by social networking sites. Furthermore we can update (ale co?) on friends or share a picture and 'etc' (no, no, jak mozemy update etc? wytlumacz mi).
Next positive 'sites' (zle slowo) (brak czasownika) modern technology 'is' (niepotr) 'offer' (3os.l.poj) new workplaces. Thanks to (3ci raz, to samo, ale i tak zle), we can work at home. As a result we can 'saves' (to ma byc l. mn) on time and money 'for (zle slowo) 'commucation' (ortog).
On the other hand using modern technology 'is' (niepotr slowo) (daj tutaj modala) cause health problems. People who 'spending' (zla czesc mowy) 'to' (zle slowo) much time in virtual reality 'lelead' (popraw) to addictions 'adl' (popraw) lack of exercise (daj tu modala) lead to obesity.
'Cryminal' (ortog) 'breal' (ortog) into to 'somoebodys' (ortog) computer and 'still' (zle slowo) personal data. Thanks to (tutaj trzeba cos dac), they 'are' (niepotr) gain 'acces' (ortog) to your account and they (daj tu modala) take 'the' (zly przedimek) loan 'on' (zle slowo, nie mozemy na banku brac loan) the bank.
Next disadvantage (brak slowa) modern technology 'i' (popraw) 'deskill' (popraw - nie wiem co to) factory 'wjich' (ortog) 'caused' (daj 'causes') dismissal (cos brak) employees and THEY ARE replaceD 'they' ( zlym miejscu) (brak slowa) machines. But on the other hand 'deskill' (nie rozumiem tego slowa) lead' (3os.l.poj) to 'increaze' (ortog) the profits (brak slowa) the company.
Next downside (brak slowa) modern technology is easier 'acces' (ortog) to the sites with 'inappropirate' (ortog) 'contens' (ortog). For example juveniles internet users can browse 'pronographic' (tak samo jak to jst 'pron'?) 'siter' (ortog) 'sor' (popraw) hate sites, in 'the' (niepotr) other words sites 'witch' (gdzie ty ja znalazles?) propagate racism
Most 'pover' (ortog) stations 'used' (daj czas teraz.) 'fassil' (ortog) fuel to 'generation' (zle slowo, tu 'generate') 'of' (niepotr) 'electricy' (ortog) AND 'produc' (ortog) burning coal WHICH is CO2 which causeS global warming
Musisz to pomalu poprawic i wkleic jeszcze raz.