I am writing to +you to requst+ more information about your school, WHICH I am +planning+ to attend this summer. My name is XYZ +, I live in Poland, and I am a student+. I would be grateful if you could give me some +additional+ details.
Firstly*,* could you tell me what kindS of courses do you offer and what IS the cost of each OF THEM?
/Ja bym jednak wolł uniknąć takiego pytania, charakterystycznego dla f. mówionej i dał tu:
First, I wish you could tell me more about the kinds of courses available and the cost of each of them./
I will BE STAYING in London FOR 3 months, so I would like to know how long +the courses last, as well.+
/albo:
Also, because my stay in London will be limited to a three-month period, I would like to ask about the duration of each course./
Secondly*,* you didn't write about your requirementS. You only mention that students who attend to your school have to share their rooms.
/To powyższe brzmi dość nieuprzejmie. Może:
Secondly, I have noticed little information about your requirements, except that students would be ready to share rooms. Is that indeed the only requirement for students?/
+As far as the accomodation issue is concerned,+ (Co się tyczy kwestii zakwaterowania) I used to live with my younger brother so it IS NOT A problem for me. I +can+surely accept this (situation).
+My English is quite good+ AND I learn very quickly. I can communicate in this language without any problems but I should improve my writing skills. +I hope you can suggest the right course that could help achieve that.+
Thank you in advance for your assistance. +I am looking+ forward to your reply.