Sprawdzenie zdań.

Czy mógłby ktoś obeznany sprawdzić / poprawić w razie czego te zdania ? :) Dziękuje z góry.

The worst advertisment in my life is the advertisment of toothpaste. It shows two people , one with awful teeth and second with beautiful. This first person was shown in very strange way, which I really didn't like. I put me off buying this product. I remebered this awful mouth and I would never forget it. Bad opiniom about it will stay in my memory for ever. I don't recommend it for anyone.

a toothpaste advertisement (nie moze byc 'the', bo dopiero to przedstawiasz)
one has awful teeth, and the other has beautiful teeth
czegos brakuje przed 'very'
I put me off buying - niezrozumiałe
'opinion' nie pasuje, może 'image', oczywiscie z przedimkiem