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Why do we listen to music?
One of my favourite way of spending free time is listening to music. Music also is additional activity in my daily life. This is a huge part of my life and has a big impact on that. It would be worth considering why I listen to music and what king of songs I prefer.
Basically I listen to music because I want to manage my mood. Music sometimes provides pleasure and helps improve my mood through reduces negative emotions. So if the song describes my current emotions, the music stimulates positive behavior. Briefly, when I listen my favourite songs, I can feel better.
It’s worth to say that my musical preferences has changed with age. I have noticed when I were younger I would benefit from different reasons. Of course, the overarching goal has been my pleasure and relax, but I perceived it through different mechanism. When I was a teenager, it were important to me for instance social connection, preferences my friends and entertainment. Now, the key to my musical preferences are relax, novelty and all mental activities that are connected with them.
Undoubtedly, the best choice type of music depends on my mood, activities what I do and situations where I am. For example, if I clean up my room or I work out I especially decide to happy and quick music. This will be my motivation to run. In the other hand the lively music can be annoying during doing homework to English lesson  If I want to be focused on something I don’t choose this music. I chiefly prefer some slow and quiet songs at that moment.
A very good example of describing my musical preferences is music on the radio. I often prefer listen to music on the radio, but I sometimes is irritating to me. I think that because songs change immediately. One time is my favourite, second time is the worst song.
To sum up, music supporst my mental health and well-being. Throughout daily routine of listetning to music I reduce my stress and fell better. Music is certainly the one of the important elements of my life, so it constitutes sense of this.

One of my favourite way of spending free time..
Music also is additional activity..
This is a huge part of my life and has a big impact on that.
It would be worth considering why I listen to music and what king of songs I prefer. nie wiem co to znaczy ;-)
helps improve my mood through reduces negative emotions.
Briefly, when I listen my favourite songs, I can feel better. czegoś brak
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One of my favourite 'way' (popraw) of spending free time is listening to music. 'Music also is' (popraw) (przedimek) additional activity in my daily life.
It would be worth considering why I listen to music and what 'king' (popraw) of songs I prefer.
Music sometimes provides pleasure and helps (brak slowa) improve my mood through 'reduces' (popraw) negative emotions. So if the song describes my current emotions, the music stimulates positive 'behavior' (cos tu nie tak, dlaczego napisalas slowo 'favourite w BrE, a teraz zamnieniasz na AmE?).
It’s worth 'to say' (saying) that my musical preferences 'has' (preferences to l. mnoga, tutaj czasownik l. mn) changed with age. I have noticed THAT when I 'were' WAS younger I would 'benefit from different reasons' (cos tu nie tak). Of course, the overarching goal has been my pleasure and 'relax' (dokoncz slowo), but I perceived it through different mechanism. When I was a teenager, it 'were' (ale 'it' to 3os.l.poj) important to me for instance (brak slowa) social connection, preferences (brak slowa) my friends and entertainment. Now, the key to my musical preferences are 'relax' (dokoncz slowo), novelty and all mental activities that are connected with them.
Undoubtedly, the best choice (brak 2 slowa) type of music depends on my mood, activities what I do and situations where I am. For example, if I clean up my room or I work out I especially decide to (brak slowa) happy and (brak slowa) quick music.
'In' ON the other hand 'the' (niepotr) lively music can be annoying during doing homework 'to' (zle slowo) English lesson.
I often prefer 'listen' (dokoncz slowo) to music on the radio, but 'I' (zle slowo, tutaj 'it') sometimes is irritating to me. I think 'that' (tutaj dalabym 'it is') because songs change immediately. One time is my favourite (song), second time is the worst song.
To sum up, music 'supporst' (popraw) my mental health and well-being. Throughout daily routine of listetning to music I reduce my stress and 'fell' (zle slowo, tutaj 'feel') better. Music is certainly 'the' (niepotr) one of the important elements of my life, so it constitutes 'sense of this' (tego nie rozumiem).

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Why do we listen to music?
This is the best practice for spending my free time . Music is one of the most important activity in my daily life. This is a huge part of my life and it has a big impact on it. It would be worth considering why I listen to music and what king of songs do I like.
Basically I listen to music because I want to manage my mood. Music sometimes provides pleasure and helps me improve my mood by reducing negative emotions. So if the song describes my current emotions, the music stimulates positive behaviour. Briefly, when I listen my favourite songs, I can feel better.
It’s worth saying that my musical preferences have changed with age. I have noticed that when I was younger I would listen to music from different reasons. Of course, the overarching goal has been my pleasure and chillout, but I perceived it through different mechanism. When I was a teenager, it was important to me for instance as social connection, preferences of my friends and entertainment. Now, the key to my musical preferences are relaxation, novelty and all mental activities that are connected with them.
Undoubtedly, the best choice of the type of music depends on my mood, activities what I do and situations where I am. For example, if I clean up my room or I work out I especially decide to listening happy and quick music. This will be my motivation to run. On the other hand lively music can be annoying during doing homework for English lesson  If I want to be focused on something I don’t choose this music. I chiefly prefer some slow and quiet songs at that moment.
A very good example of describing my musical preferences is music on the radio. I often prefer listening to music on the radio, but it sometimes is irritating to me. I think it is because songs change immediately. One time is my favourite song, second time is the worst song.
To sum up, music supports my mental health and well-being. Throughout daily routine of listetning to music I reduce my stress and feel better. Music is certainly one of the important elements of my life, so it constitutes sense of it.

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