mam małą prośbę...

Mam małą prośbę. Napisałem ostatnio pewien tekst o osobie, która przysłużyła się w pewien sposób naszej cywilizacji. Z tym właśnie teksetem wiąże się moja prośba. Czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić ten tekst pod względem stylistycznym (czy po prostu dobrze ułożyłem zdania). Będe bardzo wdzięczny. Pozdrawiam. ;]
Oto ten tekst:

Aleksander Graham Bell was born in 1847 in Scotland.
His father was director and proprietor of school for deaf people.
In this school people was learning sign language.
Although, Graham Bell was not deaf, he studied in father’s school.
After completion this school, he studied in polytechnic in Edinburgh.
There began his career. Because his mother was deaf person, he had one
purpose . He wanted to invent device, witch will help deaf people.
In 1870 Graham Bell drive off to Canada on rehabilitation after pneumonia. There he acquaint with his prospective wife- Mabel Hubbard. She was also deaf person. Mabel’s father was very wealthy person. When he acquaint oneself with Bell’s plans about amplifier of sound for deaf people, he decided to fund his plans. Graham Bell for money from his prospective father built little laboratory. He invented there loudspeaker and microphone. However, they was to big for use them to create hearing aid. His wife offer him to connect loudspeaker and microphone. And this way Aleksander Graham Bell created first telephone.
At the end of Bell’s life he began to concern planes. He sponsored brothers Wright and he invented for them plane’s control system. He was also cofounder
of very famous papers – National Geographic and Science. Aleksander Graham Bell died in 1922. He is not my hero but I think without his most
important invention we could be have hard nut to crack.
That’s about size of it.

Jest to dość długi tekst , dlatego nie bede zaskoczony jeśli nikt mi go nie srawdzi, lecz mimo to mam małą nadzieję , że ktos sie pokusi ;] .

> Aleksander Graham Bell was born in 1847 in Scotland.
>His father was WORKIN AS A director and proprietor IN school. >AT this school people WERE learning sign language BECAUSE THEY WERE DEAF.
>Although, Graham Bell was not deaf, he studied in father's school.
>After GRADUATION, he studied in polytechnic in Edinburgh.
>There HE began his career. He wanted to invent device, witch will help deaf people because his mother was deaf.
> In 1870 Graham Bell drive off to Canada on rehabilitation after
>pneumonia. There he acquaint with his prospective wife- Mabel Hubbard.
who was deaf also. Mabel's father was very wealthy person. When
>he acquaint oneself with Bell's plans about amplifier of sound for
>deaf people, he decided to fund his plans. Graham Bell for money from
>his prospective father built A little laboratory. He invented there
>loudspeaker and microphone. However, they was to big for use them to
>create hearing aid. His wife offerED HIM CONNECTING loudspeaker WITH
>microphone. CONSEQUENTLY Aleksander Graham Bell created first
>telephone.
>At the end of Bell's life he began to concern planes. He sponsored
>brothers Wright and he invented plane's control system for them . He
>was also cofounder
> of very famous papers - National Geographic and Science. Aleksander
>Graham Bell died in 1922. He is not my hero but I think THAT without his
>most
>important invention we could be have hard nut to crack. ( NIE WIEM O CO CI TAM CHODZI - JA BYM NAPISALA : our life could be less comfortable and harder.)
>That's about size of it.

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