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Topic: Men should do 50% of the housework
Hi!
My name is Iza and I tackle the problem shoud men do 50% of the hausework. All over the world woman symbolize housekeepers and child-minders. For ages man are breadwinners, they earn money. These days hardly ever we observe unfair treatment of people becouse of their sex. Man say that they don't have time for hausework. But when woman work in their proffesion, they haven't got enough for e.g. cleaning the house. Sometimes woman don't feel up to doing something for instance wigh lifting, move forniture or beat carpet. So in my opinion when the woman and man have equal rights, man should do 50% of the housework.
Best wishes for editorial staff,
Iza

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MY INTENTION IS TO tackle the ISSUE TITLED "Should THE men do the 50 % of the HOusework....

The womEn symbolize the housekeepers and the child-minders all over the world

The mEn are the breadwinners, they've been doing it forever

You hardly ever get a ROUGH DEAL becAuse of your sex these days

The mEn say they don't have time for THEIR hOusework

But EVEN IF the womEn work in their trade, they haven't got enough time for e.g. cleaning the house.

Sometimes THE womEn don't feel EQUAL to do something for instance, to lift stuff high, move the fUrniture nor beat a carpet etc.

So in my opinion, if the womEn and the mEn have the equal rights, THE mEn should do 50% of the housework.