Prosze sprawdzcie ta prace

Tak jak w temcie prosze o sprawdzenie poprawnosci tego tekstu. Jest to reklamacja telewizora, z gory dziekuje!

Dear Sir
I write to Your company because I have got a problem witch TV. I bought it two days ago in a supermarket “Not to idiots” and today it does not work. When I wanted turn up it I did not see anythnig. I do not what it can be. Maybe screen is broken. I can hear strange sounds. I plug in everything few times but it do not help. I choice PHALAPS product I think this is very good company and You do not leave me alone and help me. I would like You to give me the same new TV or give me my money back.
I am looking forward to hearing from You.

>I write to Your company because I have got a problem witch TV.
I am writing (...) with my TV
>bought it two days ago in a supermarket “Not to idiots"
(...) Not for idiots"
>When I wanted turn up
When I turned it on
> I do not what it can be
I do not know what it could be
>I plug in everything few times but it do not help
I plugged everything in and out a few times but it didn't help.
>I choice PHALAPS product I think this is very good company and You do not leave me alone and help me.
I have chosen (...) I think that is a very good company and You will not leave my case and help.
>I would like You to give me the same
>new TV or give me my money back.
(...)to give me a new TV or return the money.

Dzieki serdeczne! Faktycznie powinien tu wszedzie byc czas przeszly wtedy to ma sens. Pozdrawiam!

anytime :)

'you', 'yours' etc - w srodku zdania piszemy malymi literami