My favourite singer is {an} Englishman Robbie Williams. In my opinion he is the best and {unique}. His music always {makes} me feel better. I spend a lot of time {} translating his {lyrics}, which are really interesting and wise.
My obsession started in July last year. I saw him on TV {at} the 'Life8' concert in London. He was really amazing {there} and I wanted to know {} something more about him and learn more his songs. The next two weeks I spent {} listening to his songs and reading news and his biography.
Robbie {was} born in {a} small town in England Stoke-on-Trent. He started his {career} in {the} famous boysband of 90s: “Take That". But he left it in 1995. His first solo album was called “Life thru a lens". It was a very good beginning of his solo {career} {because} people enjoyed it very much. He revolutionized {} Europe by {the} song “Angels" - {the} fifth single from {that} album. I suppose that {everyone knows this song}.
In 2005 “Angels" was voted best song of the last 25 years by BBC Radio listeners, and received a special award at the 25th Brit Awards ceremony.
{There are 12 really good tracks on his latest album “Intensive Care"}. I love all of them and it's hard {for} me to choose {the} one {which is} the best. But I think that I like “Advertising space" the most. It's the letter from Robbie to Elvis Presley, Rob's favourite singer ever.
Now, he {is planning} a new world tour. He is going to visit Africa and {a} lot of {European} countries. Unfortunately, he won't visit Poland....
Apart from some spelling mistakes you've made I'm of the opinion that you've done a good piece of writing... Well done, bro.