formal letter do sprawdzenia ;)

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hey mam prosbe czy moglibyscie sprawdzic ten list i powiedziec czy jest on zgodny mneij wiecej z zasami pisania formal letter ? dziekuje z gory !!

Dear Sir,
I am applying for the post advertised on www.xxx.xx.
I'm interested in renting your property. I and my 3 friends are flying to Ireland in the end of July. We are from Poland and we will work here. But i'd like to make a few questions:
Is it possible to pay for renting weekly?
How much is the deposit?
How large are bedrooms ?
Is there possibility to move in at 28/29 of June?
Yours faithfully,

Adam Nowak

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