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“A Money help attain happiness in life”
In faraway time money was not a very important. People lifted modest and they can live without money, they had barter.
Today capital is very important. We must buy many indispensable think. We must eat and wears. Now days without money we can not normal life.
Thanks to money children can study. Money helps me relax, because I can go to cinema or shopping. Without currency we can not take part in life. If we have money we will a dream comes true. For example we are able to traveling.
Money help attain happiness when I can help somebody. The money is not giving happiness but it enables better life.
The currency will be dangerous. Money can presents little happiness, but it can take away. When winnings appear suddenly we do not what we do. If you have very much money, you will have false friends.
When we can buy everything, we do not enjoy shopping. Money gives momentary artificial happiness. We can not buy love and friendship.
Money do not give happiness, but sometimes help achieve its. When we want dream come true we need finances. Self-money does not give happiness, but when we earn by yourself, we enjoy. Currency is mean helping, but it is very important in our life.