proszę o sprawdzenie ;)

chciałabym, żeby ktoś mi to sprawdził i jak coś to poprawił błędy:

Joung people have a lot of problems when they become famous.
They have to count only for themeselves.
But some of them don't handle with that.
They spent less time to study and don't have time to their friends.
Become selfish and unkind for entourage.
Often trips are reason that they haven't time for family and for themselves.
They wish to be more and more famous and they don't count with any other else.
The important thing in theirs life is only the money.
The Press and fans don't want to live him alone.
They don't have very hard live and a lot of problems bacouse they are famous.

YOUNG people have a lot of problems when they become famous.
They have to count only ON themeselves. But some of them CAN'T handle that.
They spenD less time STUDYING and don't have MUCH time FOR their friends.
THEY become selfish and unkind for entourage.
Often THEIR trips are THE reason that they haven't GOT time for THEIR family and for themselves. They wish to be more and more famous and they don't count ON anyother else. The important thing in their (bez 's') life is money.
The Press and fans don't want to LEAVE THEM alone.
They don't have very hard liFe (sprawdz w slowniku roznice life and live) BUT THEY HAVE a lot of problems bECAUse they are famous.

dziękuję za poprawienie ;)